The Raven

The Raven


Walking slowly on my way back home,
I passed beneath dense trees and then though,
The setting sun was at the deepest chrome,
A dark silhouette came through with me too,

A Raven's swooped striking with its beak,
And left me wondering as to why ?
Its harsh croaks came from above the trees,
And then I heard the baby bird's cry,

That dark plumage and mysterious eyes,
Intruded into Raven's nest, crushing eggs,
Lacking vision of the higher skies,
Will the villain pay on piercing pegs ?

No compassion, ready to play foul,
Raven's wraith is as bad as the owls !



Written Oct 3rd, 2014
For contest 'The Raven' by Kelly Deschler 
Inspired by poem'The Raven' by EA Poe


Now entered into Kelly's "My last contest"

Awarded 4th place

Now Entered for "100 in a row contest-17" poetry contest by PD A
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Kimathi Avatar
October 7, 2016 at 7:19 AM
Congrats for your placement Dr. Upma, with this fine piece!! ;-)
Canerdy Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 12:08 PM
Really good poem, Dr. Upma. Congrats on your win! Janice
A   Avatar
October 5, 2016 at 11:30 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your awesome placement. Stop by and enjoy my latest blog "from my pen" if you'd like. SMILES ~LINDA~
A   Avatar
February 16, 2015 at 1:18 AM
Dr Upma, Congratulations in Kelly D's contest. Always ~LINDA
A  Avatar
February 15, 2015 at 10:18 PM
Dr Upma, , CONGRATS on your awesome placement ~ SKAT ~
Arowolo Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 4:15 PM
Wonderful piece,Lovely write..Congrats on your well deserved win...
Allison Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:51 PM
Dropping back again with my congrats Dr Sharma :-) hugs Jan xx
Deschler Avatar
February 7, 2015 at 2:27 PM
I remember this great entry from "The Raven" contest and I enjoyed reading it once again. Congrats on the win and thank you for participating, Dr. Upma!
Kayode Avatar
October 14, 2014 at 8:48 AM
A lot you put into this,congrats Dr.
Mehta Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 10:04 PM
Well crafted sonnet, Dr. Upma, congrats
Deschler Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 7:18 PM
I really enjoyed your vivid descriptions of the heartless raven. Your poem also had a very nice rhyme to it! Congrats on your win, Dr. Upma!
Callus Avatar
October 6, 2014 at 8:40 AM
You tackled this raven theme very well, Upma. It is what the sponsor would be expecting in her contest. I wanted to take part but I can't seem to find the time! gl // paul
Callus Avatar
October 13, 2014 at 6:05 PM
...back with deserved congratulations Upma...well done!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:12 AM
I am grateful to Debbie for her technical and languistic inputs to make my poem look far better than I did! Thanks a lot my good friend!
Dietrich Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 12:20 AM
Do you mean an omen worse than an owl. I think in Poe's case, it certainly was worse than an owl! this contest was very challenging so I wish you and everyone good luck. I think she is going to hate mine!!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 5, 2014 at 5:13 AM
Thnx for ur wonderful comments Andrea!
Lamoureux Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 5:10 PM
This has an ominous feel. Well done.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:16 AM
Thnx for ur visit Richard!
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 4:51 PM
A very brilliant sonnet Dr. Sharma. Good luck in the contest.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 4, 2014 at 10:17 AM
Thnx a lot Brenda!
Allison Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:54 AM
deep and dark descriptive write Dr Sharma. Good luck with the contest:-) Hugs Jan xxx
A. Sharma Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Thnx for being there always wid ur very sweet words Jan !
A. Sharma Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:58 AM
Thnx for being there wud ur sweet words always Jan !
Petersen Potter Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:52 AM
Great sonnet Dr. Upma! It has that nice air of mystery I like so much in many poems. Perfect I'd say for Halloween which is very close. Good luck in this contest! I give you a 7 for this one! And is a fav keeper too. Lol. Cheers! Love and light! xxxx D.
A. Sharma Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:57 AM
U r so very kind for the high ratung my friend!
A. Sharma Avatar
October 3, 2014 at 11:56 AM
Thnx for ur very lovely words Dorian!
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