The Rattle Snake

I`m gentle ,flexible but deadly,
Patient when I`m sober, aggressive when I`m hungry,
 Humans!They  think they are wise by setting 'trap',
'Trap' for me!but  I can see it,for this I hiss.....,
many think I`m weak,but with my arrow teeth
I go for the kill;and the venom flows through  his blood stream
and the heart stops making me to have a smooth feast.


Slowly I move,twisting and rattling with my tail,
You can touch me,sit on me,but my tail?...
Please don`t go there,it`s the heart of my body,
I`ll strike you dead if you do.
I`m endowed celestially,when I fire my arrow teeth
to any prey;it runs and staggered back to me
for me to swallow; don`t underestimate me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Smith Avatar
March 30, 2014 at 2:13 PM
Ha! I really liked this, great personification!
A  Avatar
February 12, 2014 at 8:39 AM
haha, never will I underestimate the snake. SKAt
Dietrich Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 7:35 PM
I really like this one. That is one dangerous snake. Congrats!!
Mehta Avatar
January 9, 2014 at 12:48 AM
A beautiful poem, I enjoyed it and congrats on your win, Olusegun
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January 7, 2014 at 3:32 PM
Hi Olusefun . Congratulations, and thank you for entering my contest. It has been a delight hosting so many contests. If you like you can enjoy the hugs, I left all winning poems on my blog "I WILL BE FAITHFUL." link-------> http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=18505&PoetID=18720 <----- Enjoy and stop by if you'd like...... Always & Forever ** LINDA
Mccoy Avatar
January 3, 2014 at 9:32 AM
I'm happy I don't live near any Rattlers... They are found north and south of us, but as luck would have it, the most poisonous thing we have here is a tax collector ~ enjoyed your thoughts
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