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If I had made ten I would have entered again If I had reached nine That would have been fine Of course making eight would have been great And certainly seven I'd be in sheer heaven For me to make six Now that would take tricks And for me making five Not while I'm still alive As for me reaching four I'd dropped dead on the floor Then me, the top three That'll be something to see And then there's that two That'd, never would do And if I made One That would Kill all the fun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 5/1/2015 2:36:00 PM
Oh so clever! Jerry I am simply made up to get a first in your contest - oh how it has boosted my spirits to be top of the podium on my own:-) Hugs Jan xxx 7 xxx
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Date: 5/1/2015 2:16:00 PM
Very clever poem, Jerry. I admit, though, that if I had made One, I would have real fun :) Thanks again for giving me a placement in the homophones contest! I feel honored.
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