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The Rappers Thoughts

write about what sells the producers yell as i ponder the story and the story told well whom do i obey, the art or the story that sells which of these two will make ME do well of course a classic will be fantastic to be well known my heart says blast it explode upon a world unknown phrases which the world has not known phrases of a world rarely shown but when exposed to reality true wisdom and hearts will see the right words this poetry be not jest to man or God this glory be but to words that touch your reality your hurt, your pain, your happiness, your glory jest what the producer liked will be in this story the passion that makes people go wild that will be this stories style a style they haven't heard in a while a good ole classic in good ole classic style

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Date: 8/16/2017 3:00:00 PM
Hi john, reading your first here on soup, so prevalent today, will never age like we do,,an excellent sign of brilliant poetry, and poet...
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Date: 5/31/2011 4:30:00 AM
reading a few of your earliest posts because p.d. is running a contest for the first poem on the soup, I think you should enter this, it's good...and btw always obey 'the art' my dear :-)
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Date: 12/24/2010 6:56:00 AM
Wow! You have been here on the soup for a long time,,, he he he! cool no wonder you are well loved,,, The thought of this poem is crazy but your own,, i love it,,, enjoyed ,, bye for now,,, good first poem,, better than my words,,,.p.d.
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Date: 10/28/2010 4:05:00 AM
Hi John. Just dipped in and found this. You had me rappin and i don't even know what it is. Back to earth though in the last too lines. If your feet did not move to this, you must be dead. Great piece of work. Eamon
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Date: 3/16/2010 7:32:00 AM
yes I talk to Higher power too...last time I got an answer I was in Nepal in the foot hills of the Himalayas I said "I promise to stop thinking of the glass as half empty! I promise to think of it as half full!" yup I swear I heard a chuckle...and then I heard "And when you realize it's completely full, you will have learned something." HUGS VERY nice 1st poem on soup! Light & Love
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Date: 12/1/2009 8:25:00 PM
Very interesting,Hope all is well.
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Date: 9/15/2009 4:28:00 PM
Interesting lines. Soup mail. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 5/7/2009 11:26:00 AM
Very true... -Alley
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Date: 1/29/2009 1:07:00 PM
Amen to that John. What you write says alot about the "industry". So much is kept from the world because what sells is more important than truth and beauty and fresh ideas, which may not "sell" . Great rap. I want to thank you for all your wonderful comments, John. Love, Robin
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Date: 12/23/2008 5:34:00 PM
Congrats John on "The Rappers Thoughts" being featured. Where are the Beach Boys, Frankie, Paul, Fabian, Connie, Annette, and the gang. I'm not sure all rappers have thoughts. There are some good ones out there though. God Bless. Vince
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Date: 12/22/2008 8:58:00 PM
Congrats on being featured this week, Happy Holidays...Raul
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Date: 12/22/2008 12:25:00 AM
John - Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week – Merry Christmas & God Bless, MJ
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Date: 12/21/2008 3:42:00 PM
Congratulations John on your wonderful featured write of the week! Warmest wishes for a beautiful holiday! Love, Shar
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