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The Rainy Day

Rainy day Green and grey leisure You say It is a pleasure Green and grey leisure Drifting poems in sky It is a pleasure Golden kites flying very high Drifting poems in sky You want them close Golden kites fly very high You are morose You want them very close So that you can smell You are morose Indweller clouds rebel So that you can smell You have been waiting Indweller clouds rebel A restlessness fascinating You have been waiting You say A restlessness excruciating Rainy day --------------------------------- July 3, 2017

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Harshita Chaudhary

Date: 10/29/2017 1:19:00 AM

Nice poem. Loved the theme.

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2017 11:35:00 AM

Thank you ...

Gayle Rodd

Date: 7/28/2017 7:42:00 AM

A very inviting poem - makes me look forward to the rain!

Probir Gupta
Date: 10/29/2017 11:36:00 AM

Thank you ... Sorry ... Better late than never ...

Phil Capitano

Date: 7/9/2017 7:57:00 AM

Nicely done Probir, love the twist of a word here and there changes everything. PS: I love rainy days.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/11/2017 1:12:00 AM

You love words ... You know literature is a beautiful play with words ... Thank you ...

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 7/7/2017 4:50:00 PM

I agree w/Peter ... you write superbly and so creatively, Probir. A slight twist of a word and the meaning expands into so much more. Fabulous poem. Love and joy.

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2017 8:50:00 PM

Thank you, Freddie ...

Eve Roper

Date: 7/3/2017 4:08:00 PM

Perfect verse :) , Probir, love the imagery ~*

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2017 5:38:00 AM

Thank you, Eve ...

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/3/2017 1:41:00 PM

This is amazing Probir. I love it. A favorite :)

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2017 5:39:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi ...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/3/2017 1:41:00 PM

A rainy day/ an opportunity to play/ with the cloud/ that comes around! A masterful writing of a Pantoum my friend, Probir! Delightful especially with temperatures in Greece in the low 40 C!

Probir Gupta
Date: 7/5/2017 5:44:00 AM

My goodness! ... as high as 40! ... but perhaps the sucking sweat you don't have to suffer from .. Now I understand why your roof top is so intensely colourful ... Thank you for your colourful appreciation too ...