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The Rainbow's End

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At the end of every rainbow there lies a pot of Gold Or so hail all the Stories that I have been told But what do my Wondering Eyes behold? A Greater Treasure today here unfolds A Greater Treasure for some indeed For at the end of this rainbow lies a Steed! A Fair Creature that can truly make one’s Heart Sing A creature treasured by both Pauper and King Their Strength surpassed only by their Humility While Chiseled Beauty defines their Nobility So if Treasures of the Heart are what you seek Next time you see The Bow just take another peek One might just find the Truest of Friends Waiting there at The Rainbow’s End!

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2019 3:23:00 PM

Was listening to your voice reading this to recall you in my mind again (at least your voice) You are great at reading poetry.

Chris Hagy
Date: 4/3/2019 10:07:00 PM

Thanks so much Andrea...that's good to hear as I am considering adding an audio as an option for my book :) Always love your visits! :) C.H.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/17/2019 8:56:00 PM

This is so beautifully written Chris. Horses are one of the most honored animals for a good reason. I can tell how the rainbow inspired you to write this honoring both. Just lovely! Happy St. Patrick's Day! : )

Chris Hagy
Date: 3/18/2019 4:33:00 PM

Happy late St.Patrick's Day Connie :) The inspiration came pretty quick on this one, thanks for the visit and the lovely comments :) Have a great day C.H.

Vickie Hurtt - Thayer

Date: 11/24/2018 8:47:00 AM

Chris, I love this. How unique and wonderful that you captured the moment and then beautifully created words with meaning to match, very talented you are. And since I Love Horses this is one of my favorites~Vickie

Chris Hagy
Date: 11/24/2018 9:05:00 PM

Thanks so much Vickie for the visit and warm comment :)...it was a very inspiring site! :) Have a great day fellow horse lover :) C.H.

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/13/2018 8:54:00 AM

Beautiful rhymes and imagery canter smoothly through your graceful poem, Chris. Your amazing poem contains two things I love; rainbows and horses. An exquisite, rhythmic write that I enjoyed listening to and reading. Your voice is wonderful as is your photo. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Chris Hagy
Date: 11/13/2018 8:44:00 PM

Thanks so much Susan!...you have such a wonderful way with words...much appreciated comments and visit :) Have a great day :) C.H.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/9/2018 7:30:00 AM

Beautiful! Surprising us with a steed then a hopeful promise of the truest of friends. Then my mind goes back to the steed, perhaps he is that treasured friend! A fave, Chris!

Chris Hagy
Date: 11/9/2018 8:45:00 PM

Thanks for the visit and kind words Kim :) Hope you have a great day :) C.H.

Paul Callus

Date: 10/16/2018 1:24:00 PM

A very enjoyable poem in a pretty rhyme scheme, Chris. Both your love for nature and for horses take centre stage. Having you reading the poem is undoubtedly an added bonus:) Warm regards // paul

Chris Hagy
Date: 10/16/2018 9:41:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed hearing this one Paul :) I just couldn't help writing something about this pix after I took it... and I probably wouldn't have done that before I joined PS :) Thanks to you and everyone here for encouraging me to be a better writer... and thanks again Paul for reading my book :) C. H.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/15/2018 3:51:00 PM

It's so great to hear your voice, chris. and I notice this poem is related to the bareback comment you left me on my poem. You must really love horses. A charming poem.

Chris Hagy
Date: 10/16/2018 9:31:00 PM

As I told another souper here...I don't just love horses, I Live horses!... we call it a "disease" :0... but as you can see from this pix, it is also a blessing! Have a great day Andrea :) C.H.

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2018 6:00:00 AM

Oohh luv ya voice... Your read this so well, I didnt have to read it! Nice rhymes and flow...

Chris Hagy
Date: 10/16/2018 9:28:00 PM

Thanks so much Silent...always thrilled when people enjoy my voice, and I always appreciate your visits... have a good one :) C.H.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/14/2018 4:07:00 PM

Very beautiful poem..just like the rainbow it depicts..well done, Chris.

Chris Hagy
Date: 10/14/2018 4:34:00 PM

Wow...that was fast! Thanks so much Vijay :)...still working on my voice audio for this one tonight, and I fixed the spacing problem with the first line. :) have a great night:) C.H.