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The Rainbow

God makes the rainbow always a reminder of overarching grace
written August 2, 2021 SECOND PLACE WINNER entered "Haiku" Poetry Contest sponsored by Regina McIntosh HONORABLE MENTION "What Does a Rainbow Whisper to You" Poetry Contest All Poetry, August 10, 2021 RANKED #15 on Poetry Soup's 100 BEST NEW POEMS for August, 2021

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Date: 8/29/2021 8:06:00 PM
Most Excellent! The whispered grace of rainbows. Congrats!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/30/2021 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much, Reed. I appreciated your read and your thoughtful comment.
Date: 8/22/2021 11:39:00 AM
Wonderful YES ! Gorgeous Haiku. Congratulations on your win :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/22/2021 6:54:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment, Paris-Maree.
Date: 8/13/2021 7:20:00 PM
Beautiful haiku. I love your use of the word "overarching" It fits perfectly with the subject.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/13/2021 7:29:00 PM
Thank you so much, Barbara. This little poem has been well-received. I'm proud of it.
Date: 8/7/2021 10:57:00 AM
Beautiful write Hank.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:21:00 PM
Thank you. I don't feel I have mastered the Haiku form. They are not so easy to write.
Date: 8/5/2021 12:26:00 PM
Absolutely superb Milton i adore poems about rainbows, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. Just got home from a four day hospital stay with heart issues. I wrote a couple of haikus while I was in the hospital. I wish I were better at writing them with a twist in the third line.
Date: 8/4/2021 10:14:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! God bless you.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:23:00 PM
Thanks, Beata. I love rainbows. They have such meaning for me.
Date: 8/4/2021 3:28:00 PM
OH YEAH...those stop you in your tracks moments....beautifully recaptured here Milt.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:23:00 PM
Of course you realize that everyone takes notice of a rainbow. It is such an overpowering statement and so natural.
Date: 8/4/2021 3:18:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. A lovely/beautiful write. I love God's pretty rainbows. Have a great/blessed day..................
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/7/2021 4:24:00 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. I appreciate you.
Date: 8/4/2021 10:37:00 AM
Like the wordplay! Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/4/2021 12:19:00 PM
Thanks, Kim. I really appreciate your congratulations and glad you enjoyed my poem.
Date: 8/4/2021 6:28:00 AM
Love this so... Wonderful writing. God bless you and congrats . Love, Gina
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/4/2021 8:17:00 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment and giving me a high placement in your contest, Regina. I enjoyed writing for you.
Date: 8/4/2021 1:17:00 AM
Yep, totally agree:)
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Date: 8/2/2021 2:20:00 PM
Very nice Milton :)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/2/2021 2:21:00 PM
Heidi, thanks for your thoughtful comment. Have a wonderful week.
Date: 8/2/2021 12:55:00 PM
WoW! Milt, A rainbow is such a beautiful reminder. Well done:-) Alexis
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/2/2021 1:30:00 PM
Thanks so much, Alexis. Glad you liked my haiku.

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