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The Rain Effect

The rain outside my door
Its talk, a calming effect
Upon my restless spirit, implores 
the need to reflect.

The rain, drenching the moors
Its pounding upon rocky crests
Like the clapping of hands, soars
Upon the senses, dissolving stress.

The rain inviting me outdoors
Its plead to leave the comfort of concepts
Exchanging the warmth of safe indoors
For the dramatic cold of clarity, intercepts.

The rain, cleansing a downpour 
Its relentlessness stripping the walls erected
Around the damaged heart, explores
Upon new possibilities, wider directed.

The rain, beckoning a force
Its puddles upon my feet impress
With childlike laughter, a dance extorts
Revving the spirit, the genuine soul expressed. 


By CarolineCécile
copyright © 02.06.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/27/2010 9:02:00 AM
YOu described many ways the rain beckons you, Caroline. What a nice way to write of rain! I don't like that old rain. hahaha. But you make it sound quite pleasant. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/10/2010 7:07:00 AM
Very beautiful write. Reading your poem is like enjoying the rains with the beauties of outside cold and inside warmth. Excellent Poem my friend. Best wishes and love Ravindra ........ccp
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Date: 2/8/2010 1:31:00 PM
Nice use of imagery and personification for an interesting view. You have me smiling with your poem. Keep on writing! Thank you for your kind comment. Karen
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Date: 2/7/2010 5:15:00 AM
Good exploration of what a Rain storm "once in a while" :) can do to a poetic heart. very nicely done, Caroline. congratulations on bringing these senses out so clearly in this write in such a poetic manner. _Robert
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:41:00 AM
Like the kyrielle flavour Caroline.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:08:00 AM
This poem is wonderful Caroline! It goes into my favorite file. I can never get enough of the rain. Two years ago it rained here in Hawaii 41 days straight (which it never does) and I may have been the only one to still be enjoying it. Blessings, Connie
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Date: 2/6/2010 10:13:00 PM
Caroline, you did a wonderful job with this one. I like how you related rain to other "new possibilities" I don't like a rainy day (spent my early childhood in WA, YUCK!!) But I love THIS rain poem. LUv,Andrea
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:11:00 PM
Wonderful poem about rain...Enjoyed reading tonight...Marty
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Date: 2/6/2010 7:21:00 PM
Interesting, I'm wet!
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