The Rain and You

My dear rain! You are for who? 
The dry and fatigue earth
hopes to fill her pores; 
The poet who loves the cloud
waiting to waste the diary; 
My mother needs you
for her children
My father needs you for his wife
Rain! who do you love more? 
-The cute couple
waiting for romance; 
The new wife to bathe;
-kids to play
To float a paper boat
Do you want to soothe my drops?

Rain near the window
The sounds - drip drip drip
The darkness around my mind
The flow of water, and cold feelings
Give pains
It only reminds me of you!


Litan Dey
The Contest "THE FRAGRANCE OF RAIN.”
10/11/2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Deschler Avatar
November 12, 2013 at 5:47 PM
A touching poem, very heartfelt! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the kind comments.
Onclaud Avatar
November 11, 2013 at 10:23 AM
thank you,litan.. please include sense of smell in here... what is the fragrance of rain.. best of luck!.:) huggs
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