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The Rain and the Void

The rain falls gently past my face Not touching though, to my disgrace The cleansing rain, that from head to toes Creates placid sweet peace, anyway it goes Had abandoned my skin, my flesh it avoids As silently drifting I fall through the void

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 2/16/2017 2:21:00 PM
I like this poem . Well done.I enjoyed this poem.Nice rhyme.Rainy days make me sleepy as well. I call that liquid sunshine for the grass trees, and vegetable garden.
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Anna Nomaly
Date: 4/4/2018 10:41:00 AM
It's funny, I actually set an alarm to wake up at 2 am and write a short poem or anything that rhymes, to see what my just woken up brain would create. By morning I had forgotten whatever I had written, and was pleasantly surprised to see the first and last stanza

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