The Rain and the Voice

I can hear it calling through the rain,

Its calling my name.

I feel alone,

And chilled to the bone.

As the rain falls down,soaking my clothes.

Who is it that is calling my name?

Who is it that is to blame?

Every direction looks the same!

I scream for help but all I see is rain,

I know I must be going insane!

All I hear is that voice,

I quieted my screams,

I am lost,that is what it seems...

There is no other choice,

Then the rain ceases to cry,

I can now look up at the blue skies...

As the voice slowly fades away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 8/9/2014 9:08:00 PM
Fantastic inspiring poem, very well written Ettie
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 8/13/2014 2:35:00 PM
Thank you Lisa, Im soo happy that you like it-Love Ettie
Date: 7/17/2014 2:12:00 PM
Reminds me of the song "The rain, the park and other things" by the Cowsills. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Ettie Christian-Bowling
Date: 7/19/2014 7:40:00 PM
Never heard of it....but thx for stopping by Matthew -Love Ettie
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