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The Rain

I remember the first time I had acknowledged the rain Wrapped in your arms, what a cosy scene! The rain drops had caressed and made a mess of my hair but I didn't seem to care because you were near. The rain had made the moment a little more special A little more memoriable, a liitle more pleasurable I have discovered in your eyes, LOVE when I first acknowledged the rain. That picturesque moment would never be forgetten It was like a moment frozen in time, a moment that would like a good movie be rewatched or recorded over and over again in the mind.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/16/2013 8:09:00 AM
Memories are forever.
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Date: 4/21/2012 6:19:00 AM
Lovely written Anoush. - Let the sun shine during the day....drop down rain at night. - Have a lovely weekend. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Anoush Harrison-Jackson
Date: 7/20/2013 8:15:00 AM
Thanks Anne.
Date: 4/20/2012 3:51:00 PM
Thanks, Anoush, for the visit. Yes, once you dont mind getting a lil wet, hugging and caressing could get a lot more physical in rain, keep writing, jag
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