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Verse/the rain
Copyright, ID 06-1828-767-06-26
All Rights, Constance La France
Plagiarism Prohibited

Penned, June 06, 2026/ Human Written
For the International Contest, Bite Size No. 146
Sponsor, Line Gauthier, 06/14/2026

"BEAUTIFUL"

 

the rain

the rain began as gentle pitter-patter and soon became a torrent I was worried for my new plants thinking they could be swept away but to my joy they are happy raising their heads to drink the rain
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Dietrich Avatar
June 10, 2026 at 1:19 AM
This is so sweet how the plants raise their heads to drink the rain . Cute one
La France Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:20 PM
Andrea, thank you for the compliment and comment ~
M  Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 7:23 PM
Aww such a sweet poem Constance….love my plants and the rain! Debx
La France Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:21 PM
Deb, thank you for the compliment and comment ~
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 7:20 PM
No amount of watering can equal the amazing rain as it falls pitter-patter down upon plants lovingly planted. Now to watch your garden grow.
La France Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:22 PM
Alison, thank you for the comment, yes rain is better than a watering can for sure ~
Godwin Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 6:28 PM
You never know! When we have plant babies we're alert to all weather possibilities. I could almost hear your vocal sounds of relief because I know them. In Florida, there are not only quick, raging rains but as you know hurricanes and its no small feat carrying all my plants inside before one hits. You're a good Mama, plants and kitties, right? We love ours.
La France Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:23 PM
CayCay, thank you for the comment and sharing, I have done that carry all the hanging plants, window boxes, and containers inside many times ~
Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2026 at 5:02 PM
Yes, plants amaze me that their strength, vigor and recovery from any damage. I enjoyed reading this one today. Way to go. Sara K.
La France Avatar
June 11, 2026 at 2:24 PM
Sara, plants are amazing, you think they will not survive a rain storm but they do, thanks for the comment ~
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