The Race of Life

We worked in and worked out
She knelt down in silent prayer
Our bodies shaped without doubt
Unable to see the pain so rare

We danced and we sang songs
She gave the best of herself to all
We watched her smile a mile long
Unable to see the fear lurking on the wall

And as we soared and ate gala feast
She kept a vigil by the window sill
The disease ate her like a starved beast
Alone she took the chemo, the pain and the pill

We fought and watched each other’s back
She went thru some searing days
The angels watched her every track
They were with her all the way

Sad and disturbed and neglected we felt
She showed miracles with a smiling face
With strength and hope and confidence
She ran ahead of us in this life’s race

Dedicated to the most wonderful woman I’ve ever known, my spiritual mother, (AM), who had breast cancer and she survived and is well.
27/10/2012

By Tahera Mannan
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:52 AM
A Super Congratulations on your placement in P.D....'s "Femme fatale" contest Tahere. Love Carol
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December 3, 2012 at 3:53 AM
Congrats on your HM Tahera xx
Guzzi Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 5:55 PM
Because you are you..you draw wonder and kindness to you..like seeks like :)Congrad's on your winning write. Light & Love
Gasun Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 10:13 AM
My hearty congratulations on your awesome win my dear friend, Tahera! love and hugs, Leonora
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December 2, 2012 at 4:15 AM
Tahera. :-) Congratulations with your heartfelt poem.. always~ PD
Palmer Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 9:56 PM
lovely,God watches over His angels,prayer is the key that opens every miracle,great write Tahera
Horsman Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 10:02 AM
wonderful poem, with a positive ending. my nephew as just been diagnoised with leukemia,his chemo starts tomorrow... thanks for this poem...
Kovrlija Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:59 AM
So lovely and touching.
Cavanaugh Avatar
October 28, 2012 at 1:45 AM
What a beautifully touching poem. Your spiritual mother sounds like an angel.
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 8:23 PM
This is a beautiful tribute to a brave soul. So happy to hear she is now well. My sister in law, younger than me, passed away from breast cancer. She fought the good fight but didn't tell anyone. She died as she lived, privately. I often wonder if prayer and Reiki could have saved her had she confided in us, her family. She left behind a son and daughter and never got to see her first grandchild which is so sad.
Gorelick Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 4:21 PM
Hope she likes this as much I do..Its beautiful..BG
Falotico Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 2:11 PM
Beautiful piece. A proud touching poem. You are very talented. Hugs Michael
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October 27, 2012 at 12:44 AM
A wonderful poem about a wonderful woman. Thank God she is well. With warmest wishes, larisa
Onclaud Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 12:30 AM
in the midst of suffering and pure hope, your poem is written in tender flame, tahera... a joyful , beautiful read!..) huggs
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