The Race

In the short race
     from the trees to the ground,
the yellow leaves are winning,
      at least this round.

The pine needles seem distracted,
     looking here and there,
not concerned, playing and dancing
                        in the air.

The wind eggs them on,
   whistling a tune.
Autumn's trees will be bare
       all too soon.

Some of them are fast,
     some of them are slow
as they tumble t'ward the ground
      like colourful snow.

Red, yellow and green, 
      dancing on a breeze,
the race from tree to ground 
     beckons all the leaves.

Yellow leaves are winning,
    at least this round,
in their short race, 
     from the trees to the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Johnson Avatar
November 18, 2011 at 3:50 PM
when leaves some leave, and often sail away, do they wait for the tide like sailors do, do they ever figure out just why or who, does the wind these words inscribe. Don
Yakubu Avatar
November 12, 2011 at 6:03 PM
Robert...season comes seaso go...we are here too runing our race.. Love your consideration.. Luv Mathias..
Johnson Avatar
November 11, 2011 at 10:14 PM
The leaves have fallen like our men, no rhyme or reason, death of friend, sombre words the season... great poem Francine....
Dietrich Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 9:08 PM
So cool how you began and then finished with the yellow leaves . It seems like a type of form you are using! this reminded me somewhat of my Dancing Leaves poem I wrote! Really nice imagery here! Thanks, also, for my win in your contest! andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 7:13 PM
wonderfully visual Francine.. impressive lines of sheer beauty and elegance.. many many thankxx for choosing my entry for first place.. I am so honored and enjoyed creating this special piece to extol the beauty of oour new home.. appreciate the recognition luv..
Pettit Avatar
November 7, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Your description of autumn in British Columbia is quite similar to autumn in New Jersey. It is a very pervasive description that proves a delight to read.
Horne Avatar
November 6, 2011 at 7:24 AM
Lovely descriptive piece on Autumn, Francine. I just love the idea of the wind egging them on, by whistling a tune - what a wonderful imaginative way of looking at it. A sure winner, if for a contest, my friend
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 3:43 PM
Enjoyed reading your very expressive and descriptive fall work..In the south it is so dry that the leaves are falling early..Rain suppose to bless us tonight though..If for a contest, good luck..Reads like a winner..Sara
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November 3, 2011 at 2:19 PM
Big smiles reading this one, Francine. I never thought of leaves falling in a "race" to the ground before, but you created a lovely "Autumn Dream," my friend. I hope you've entered this in the contest. The ideas, imagery, rhyme and pace all flow so well. Love, Carolyn
Aul Avatar
November 3, 2011 at 12:50 PM
I really, really like your words.......George
Wilson Avatar
November 2, 2011 at 8:47 PM
All too soon those trees will be bare that's true! very nice..love,Deb
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