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The Quietening of the Guns

Barrage ceases Smoke disperses What sight awaits Of this human curse New craters formed On top of old The soil in turn Wars ploughed fold Cries echo Across bloodied fields Single bullets zip As bodies yield Where once were men Of families and friends Wanton carnage Conflict rend Patterns of dead Adorn the land Icons of death In dark demand Silence so serene As the trenches fill Naive and young For tomorrows spill The greatest reward For a war that's started Is for the war to end And remember the departed http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/war3.php

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Date: 8/3/2009 6:06:00 PM
This poem touched me in a way I never knew I could be touched! Beautiful and very creative! Keep up the awesome work! Deb
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Date: 7/24/2009 7:06:00 AM
Wwll written and so true!!!!! Bill
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Date: 7/23/2009 5:32:00 PM
your last stanza moves me deeply, great poem! James....
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Date: 7/23/2009 4:56:00 PM
The dark truth James,...the departed. great poetry! james
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Date: 7/23/2009 2:09:00 PM
Please enter this into my contest "War what is it good for?" excellent work! Light & Love
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Date: 7/23/2009 1:33:00 PM
James, Bravo my friend. For this excellent write and for the sentiment it expresses. Always, Will
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