The Quietening of the Guns

Barrage ceases
Smoke disperses
What sight awaits
Of this human curse

New craters formed
On top of old
The soil in turn
Wars ploughed fold

Cries echo
Across bloodied fields
Single bullets zip
As bodies yield

Where once were men
Of families and friends
Wanton carnage
Conflict rend

Patterns of dead
Adorn the land
Icons of death
In dark demand

Silence so serene
As the trenches fill
Naive and young
For tomorrows spill

The greatest reward
For a war that's started
Is for the war to end
And remember the departed



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Herber Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 6:06 PM
This poem touched me in a way I never knew I could be touched! Beautiful and very creative! Keep up the awesome work! Deb
Doggett Avatar
July 24, 2009 at 7:06 AM
Wwll written and so true!!!!! Bill
Goff Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 5:32 PM
your last stanza moves me deeply, great poem! James....
Peranteau Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 4:56 PM
The dark truth James,...the departed. great poetry! james
Guzzi Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 2:09 PM
Please enter this into my contest "War what is it good for?" excellent work! Light & Love
Kershaw Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 1:33 PM
James, Bravo my friend. For this excellent write and for the sentiment it expresses. Always, Will
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