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Written on May 10th, 2025 for Jcb Brullace's Spring Monoku Poetry Contest

the quiet return

lace flakes of snow melt on warmed fields....spring’s sun-drenched rays restore faith
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Rodrigues Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 12:24 PM
Very nice! Congrats!
Jama Avatar
May 30, 2025 at 9:33 AM
Thank you so much.
Gauthier Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 10:04 AM
yes... faith in a long awaited spring this year !!
Jama Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Thank you very much.
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 2:35 AM
- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Sara :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs
Jama Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Thank you the kind words.
Dietrich Avatar
May 25, 2025 at 9:36 PM
So beautiful, Sara. Congrats
Jama Avatar
May 26, 2025 at 11:30 AM
Thank you very much.
Lane Avatar
May 10, 2025 at 8:09 AM
It speaks of the advent of spring to me, Sara.
Jama Avatar
May 11, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Thank you so much.
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