the quiet return

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Written on May 10th, 2025 for Jcb Brullace's Spring Monoku Poetry Contest

lace flakes of snow melt on warmed fields....spring’s sun-drenched rays restore faith

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:24:00 PM

Very nice! Congrats!

Sara Jama
Date: 5/30/2025 9:33:00 AM

Thank you so much.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:04:00 AM

yes... faith in a long awaited spring this year !!

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:30:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:35:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Sara :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:30:00 AM

Thank you the kind words.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:36:00 PM

So beautiful, Sara. Congrats

Sara Jama
Date: 5/26/2025 11:30:00 AM

Thank you very much.

Lin Lane

Date: 5/10/2025 8:09:00 AM

It speaks of the advent of spring to me, Sara.

Sara Jama
Date: 5/11/2025 10:28:00 AM

Thank you so much.