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The Quiet Beat

Listen to the beat of life, hear its thunder, yet underneath lurks a murmuring whisper. Some days almost unheard, others louder always there it taunts, teasing like a lover. Deep within you know who makes this whisper, it is life itself ticking away as you falter. Yes now it shows its face as it comes closer, our old friend death claims us with loud clamour.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 6:39:00 PM
oh my, our old friend death. Great metaphor, Shadow. How are you doing? You are getting morose with this one, and I LIKE it because those poems really tell it how it is!
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Date: 4/18/2015 5:57:00 PM
ty Andrea almost caught up now. hmm I was not feeling morose more inquisitive I think the lines just led me there hugs
Date: 4/14/2015 6:27:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your work..If for a contest, reads like winning material to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 4/14/2015 6:36:00 PM
ty Sara no not for a contest hugs
Date: 4/14/2015 8:10:00 AM
Wow, such a powerful poem, Shadow. You have imaged beautifully the passage of time and our awareness of it, so much more so as we age. 7+Fav. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:41:00 PM
ty so much Sandra hugs
Date: 4/13/2015 2:55:00 PM
excellent pen linda deep powerful pen wishing you a blessed week pal
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:41:00 PM
ty dear friend hugs
Date: 4/12/2015 7:56:00 PM
Excellently written, Shadow! Wonderful and creative description of life and death that none of us can avoid. A 7 from me.
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Date: 4/14/2015 4:40:00 PM
ty Laura hugs

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