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The Questioner

The moon fills from the top Each day gets lighter, growing How it hold the light and it not run out The bottom just pouring Seeing the moon in day Up in the clear sky blue Makes mind search for way to express Ones' questions about you Momma always said that I could ask more questions Than Philadelphia lawyer Her.....abstentions (My mother always said that I asked too many questions ...Very inquistive child was I....Still wonder.....The word abstentions means ...no do.)

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Date: 3/2/2010 5:18:00 AM
That is the only way to learn, it to ask questions?? Good write..Danny
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Date: 2/28/2010 11:20:00 PM
I love the way your poem could move inits own circle just as the moon cycles... So clever to think of it in the same poetry as your mother's ideals for you as if you await her dreams coming true with each moon that passes.... A stroke of brilliance indeed! Thanks for your comments too, delighted. Kindest thoughts, Anna-Marie.
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Date: 2/27/2010 1:38:00 PM
a very nice write. Well worded, flows real nice. It's funny because my aunt always told me that I would become a Philadelphia lawyer. We learn by asking question. Thank you for reading my poem and for your comment.
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:25:00 AM
a very inquistive child always allows their mind and imagination grow so much bigger with so many more wonders along with unique thoughts as they are older.(: as i can see when i read your poems, Sara. i love this poem.really. -Always&Forever Lynette
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Date: 2/27/2010 8:02:00 AM
Very wonderful poem to read this morning. Put a smile on my face..My kids also ask to many questions. I admire them for that. ENJOYED
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:55:00 AM
abstentions...won't do. and you always have something creative for the reader to ponder. John H Loving III
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:22:00 AM
Well questions are what help us find answers and prove intelligence, I believe
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:16:00 AM
different poem, what did you meand by no do?
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Date: 2/27/2010 7:14:00 AM
there is a cockney slang translator on the web--amazing!!
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