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The beloved Queen of Hearts was a merry queen, who'd ever loved to bake; Like confetti midnight stars, sparkling; or the yellow, noon sun, wide awake. She baked myriad varieties of cookies, and delicious pies of different kinds; And also scrumptious cakes, so divine. Like pure gold, tinted rainbows find. The king had a cheerful disposition, too, but betimes could be quite stern; Like the scarlet blossoms, which fail to thrive, before floriculture is learned. Faithful friends became part of the many faceted court, like tinted bubbles, Fancy dressed, and as vital to royal felicity, as a jade rose, with no troubles. Forthright family were familiar at court, in the fleet, peregrine falcon days, Fast-forwarding to fabled, fruity tomorrows, and to fitful, spiced, solar rays. They lived in the house of green ivied walls, in the royal, emerald summer; When golden sun visited almost every room, eager to touch a world of color. Silver maples touched sapphire skies, on their street of red, sweet Williams, Edged by creamy sand, where the surf came, onto teal, foaming, pavilions. Nighthawks and wild wood anemones, were neighbors, bestowed by nature; In nameless, never-ending, silvery hours. Red butterflies, loved floral flavors. Heart tomatoes adored the orange sun, when wood ear mushrooms listened; And Canterbury Bells plants were ringing, by roses whereon dews glistened. Toad lilies stared in bug-eyed fascination, at the searing season of surprises; And Billy Button blooms were getting dressed, as skies split in colored slices. 'The Queen of Hearts, she made some tarts, all on a summer's day;' a Friday. But alas, 'The Knave of Hearts, he stole the tarts, And took them clean away.' When purple even arrived, 'The King of Hearts called for the tarts,' in a roar. The lad relished sweets, but the king was mad, 'And beat the Knave full sore;' 'The Knave of Hearts brought back the tarts, And vowed he'd steal no more.' The kindly queen quietly quipped, 'After all, the boy has never stolen before!' The King of Hearts was returned to good humor, and that lad kept his word; And was back in favor, like pink spring tulips, or a song of blue mockingbird.

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Date: 7/12/2024 3:57:00 PM
A fabulous reworking of The Knave of Hearts. I enjoy the addition of rare flowers and forest animals. Thanks for your genius in poetry.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/12/2024 11:10:00 PM
Your very kind words are so much appreciated. Your enjoyment of this poem is a real inspiration and delight. :)
Date: 7/8/2024 3:21:00 PM
Silver maples touched sapphire skies, on their street of red, sweet Williams, Edged by creamy sand, where the surf came, onto teal, foaming, pavilions...lovely imagery and some action at the end. Love that everything turned out well in the end! Hugs ~ Kim
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/8/2024 9:11:00 PM
Thank you so much for letting me know that this tale held appeal for you, Kim. Your compliments are deeply appreciated. Hugs. :)
Date: 7/8/2024 2:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your fun "The Queen of Hearts" write/story/great picture. Guess the King of Hearts loved the many cookies/delicious pies/cakes. Maybe she needs to open up a bakery. Hahaha!!! Have a fun day writing away............
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/8/2024 8:10:00 PM
Nothing satisfies a sweet tooth quite as well as delicious baked desserts! Thank you for your delightful words of appreciation and encouragement. I hope your coming week is nice. :)
Date: 7/6/2024 11:48:00 PM
Dear evelyn you never fail to leave me in awe inspired and impressed by how creatively you do storytelling in rhymes and rhythm using poetic techniques and exquisite diction! Brilliant couplet so well delivered and articulated. Love the ending! Thats beautiful. Gives a positive impression too. You always write so well! Pleasure reading this. A fave this is! Sending you light always
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/7/2024 7:42:00 PM
Dear Ink, your gracious remarks make my heart glad. I am thrilled you enjoyed this story! Thank you very much for your uplifting words, and for the delight of your fave. Many blessings.
Date: 7/6/2024 5:43:00 PM
Ahhh I see you melded in the nursery rhyme at the end but still keeping it very creative. Well done, Evelyn
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/6/2024 9:28:00 PM
Your gracious words are received with great pleasure, Andrea. Thank you very much.
Date: 7/6/2024 12:14:00 PM
A lovely story you’ve written Evelyn, enjoyed the read very much… Beryl
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/6/2024 9:15:00 PM
Very nice to know, Beryl. Thank you so much for the compliments. :)
Date: 7/6/2024 2:07:00 AM
this is brillant Evelyn, you made me think to Alice in Wonderland, really don't know , quite an inspiration, enjoyed yann
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/6/2024 9:02:00 PM
How nice it is to have my tale contrasted to Alice in Wonderland! Thank you very much for your kind, complimentary remarks. Blessings.
Date: 7/6/2024 1:09:00 AM
Loved your story, Evelyn. As usual, you wrote this poem with great flair. Well done.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 7/6/2024 8:59:00 PM
Thank you for the great pleasure of your comment, my friend. I'm exceedingly glad that you enjoyed this story.

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