The Queen of Day

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The Queen of Day in cool array Dances her gay dewdrop ballet Her morning rays light up the skies She lifts the Lord of Night’s disguise.

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 4/29/2023 8:48:00 AM

I love this awesome piece - such an enjoyable read! Brava, SuZ! Hugs. Pandita

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/29/2023 10:33:00 AM

Thanks so much, Pandita: Lovely of you to read and comment. Hugs, SuZ

Daniel Turner

Date: 4/17/2023 3:35:00 PM

Very beautiful, SuZ. Short and sweet:)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2023 3:51:00 PM

Thanks Daniel: I had fun using my Apple pen to write graffiti on this picture. Appreciate your nice comment. SuZ

Speaks Volumes

Date: 4/17/2023 2:51:00 PM

Uplifting and picturesque. The image enhances the poem even more. A lovely combination Suz. Very impressive. Best wishes Wen

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2023 3:52:00 PM

Thanks Wen….So glad you enjoyed it and stopped by to let me know. Best, SuZ

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 4/17/2023 1:33:00 PM

Sweet! Beautiful imagery SuZ! :)

Suzanne Delaney
Date: 4/17/2023 2:16:00 PM

Thanks Linda: I see a couple of letter mistakes on the image, now it is uploaded. Shaky hands now. It is fun playing the spider game with you.