The Queen

In lemon and green She stood Wide eyes with red lustrous lips, Carved brows like the African bow Stately like a giraffe. All eyes moved as one To behold the queen In lemon and green.

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Alozor Michael Ikechukwu

Date: 9/6/2013 10:22:00 AM

Sweet sweet sweet

Priscilla Debby Philip-Usha
Date: 8/13/2014 8:04:00 AM

Thanks, thanks and thanks

Ginger Amee Terdue

Date: 4/23/2013 7:03:00 AM

Prisca, Do you know why? I have a conviction that you were trying hard not to describe yourself. That's a nice piece anyway.

Priscilla Debby Philip-Usha
Date: 8/13/2014 8:03:00 AM

Oh my! I wish I looked half of that, then I would send you a photo to compare. Thanks alot

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 2/5/2013 5:10:00 AM

Lovely sweet poem and tnks for your kind comments re my humble poems

Priscilla Debby Philip-Usha
Date: 2/6/2013 8:34:00 AM

Thanks for considering this lovely, it means a lot.

Reggae Magnet

Date: 1/31/2013 9:36:00 AM

Is that you? elegantly put.

Priscilla Debby Philip-Usha
Date: 2/6/2013 2:43:00 AM

Hi! Robert, thanks for being the first to comment on my poem. you're words are humbling, though that was a teen on her first beauty pageant.