The Pursuit of Profundity

The pursuit of profundity prior to simplicity educes sterility Mere simplicity sans profundity precludes fecundity

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Michael Tor

Date: 2/27/2025 10:41:00 AM

Gershon your deep Profundity message is so witty and clever my friend. The relationship between the words were so cleverly selected by you and a great message was shared to the reader. Thanks for the thought and effort in this clever thought of yours...

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 2/26/2025 3:58:00 PM

I enjoy the roundabout words with their enlightening ending.

John Lawless

Date: 2/26/2025 12:07:00 PM

yeah, what he said....

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/26/2025 5:05:00 AM

You are so good at modern day proverbs!

Maria Williams

Date: 2/26/2025 4:05:00 AM

Dear Gershon,your poem is a beautifully balanced and thought-provoking piece! The interplay between profundity and simplicity is captured with elegance, and the word choices—educes sterility and precludes fecundity—add a rhythmic sophistication. A concise yet profound reflection on the harmony needed for true creativity and meaning...Maria