The Pursuit

Whether black or white, biding for a milky bite…
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March 14, 2016
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Callus Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:41 PM
You made me think and reread this one-liner, Probir! I came to conclude that it is more sensual than anything else! ~ Congratulations on a fine win. ~ Regards // paul
Gupta Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:00 AM
Before the mind words wander/ sometime in splendour/ sometime as cold as December... the sense or meaning becomes secondary.. That you like this tiny single line is a great satisfaction for me... The win may follow... Regards...
Selfa Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations Probir on your remarkable win. You never failed to write a jaw-dropping poem! You truly are praiseworthy! Keep up the good work and continue to enjoy the blessings of words and poetry. :) -HANS
Gupta Avatar
March 31, 2016 at 8:02 AM
Hello Hans, Thanks for visiting and encouraging, as you always do,...
A. Sharma Avatar
March 29, 2016 at 3:26 AM
Brilliant take Probir.. congrats on big win!
Gupta Avatar
March 30, 2016 at 2:08 AM
Thanks Upma...
Dietrich Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 12:38 PM
Cool image!! Congrats, Probir.
Gupta Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:16 PM
Thanks Andrea...
Raven Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:32 AM
Hi Probir, an excellent Monoku, enjoyed your take on the picture. This monoku goes into my faves. Have a good day. Congratulations on your win in the contest....Vlad.
Gupta Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 11:51 AM
Thank you Vlad...
Quigley Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Excellent! Congrats!
Gupta Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 9:19 AM
Thank you...
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March 26, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Probir, Congratulations on your awesome WIN. Thank you for supporting my one line verse contest. Stop by my latest blog "Do You See What I See? if you like." Happy Easter. Love LINDA
Gupta Avatar
March 27, 2016 at 3:11 AM
Thank you so much LINDA...
Hicks Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 6:52 PM
Interesting take. Either sensual, or you're biting into chocolate (white or black) ... ha ha ha. You do have a different outlook, friend.
Gupta Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Right. Thank you Timothy...
Dietrich Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 8:49 PM
nicely done, Probir. Good luck in the contest
Gupta Avatar
March 14, 2016 at 10:03 PM
Thank you Andrea.......always so encouraging.....
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