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The Pursuit

first r a y s of morning night t e a r s soaking my pillow her l i g h t awakens bringing out deep l o v e - f l a v o r s soul r e s c u e d . . . chasing the light David Meade Love Generously 2/11/2015

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Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 11/29/2015 5:29:00 PM

Delightful. Your layout and differentiation in word appearance are most effective. '...her light awakens' thank goodness! Well done David! Best wishes, Keith 7

Samiha Zubair

Date: 10/2/2015 9:12:00 AM

An inspiring poem

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 4/24/2015 12:56:00 AM

Very nice pen David! I truly enjoyed your piece.A7! Thank you for visiting my page.Much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Eve Roper

Date: 4/5/2015 8:06:00 AM

love your design of your wonderful poem. a 7. Have a wonderful Happy Easter my friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2015 6:49:00 AM

I enjoyed reading this one again!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/22/2015 10:59:00 PM

returning to this one . I like when you write this way! You have the best way of formatting things. Let me go see if I already saw your collab poem or not.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/18/2015 1:56:00 PM

Came back to reread this beautiful piece...have a blessed day

Arthur Vaso

Date: 3/16/2015 9:38:00 PM

Fantastic and so creative! Loved this poem!

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 3/12/2015 4:37:00 PM

Beautiful example of Tanka with a formatting twist. I like the spaciness of the line. I do not think there are any rules to the formatting for Japanese poetry styles, just the syllabic count. It's good to play with form!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/12/2015 2:41:00 AM

Stopping by to say hi, bring a hug, and of course, look for a new write...I hope soon :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/6/2015 9:43:00 AM

How beautiful this is,Yes David!Charma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/2/2015 1:20:00 PM

Dear David, I can tell you are a man who truly "loves generously." When we are feeling sad, finding a new love can turn our lives around. Surely, this is a "rescued" soul. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Enjoyed this 7+ write! Best wishes, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 2/28/2015 9:02:00 AM

You could list this as Free Verse David - or Prose Poetry since Prose poetry can take many different shapes on the page! Good one! Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 2/26/2015 9:45:00 AM

love each word.. love the format.. and love how each word full the strings of my thoughts and my heart.. :)! lovely!!/olive eloisa :)!

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 2/26/2015 3:32:00 AM

I like this lots David sorry for slow reply I have not been well hugs

Meg Anderson

Date: 2/24/2015 6:31:00 PM

Kinda sad but became thoughtful. It made me smile. whisper in the wind!

Constance La France

Date: 2/23/2015 9:14:00 AM

David, I am reading your poem again, it remains wonderful, there is something about those spaces between words that speaks to my soul, and thanks for visiting my poetry, I am working on more poems, I tend to be a slow writer, sometimes taking days to write one poem, not sure why that is but they seem to turn out my best ones ~~

David Mohn

Date: 2/22/2015 8:08:00 PM

So much said between the words... simply wonderful

Paul Callus

Date: 2/20/2015 4:06:00 PM

Sensually delicious words...chasing the light at dawn. Creative write, David. // paul

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/20/2015 3:22:00 PM

Ahh!!.Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

James Peranteau

Date: 2/20/2015 10:01:00 AM

Hello dear poet ! Ya knows....Andea Dietrich, one of our fine poets here on the Soup is holding one of her contests on poems with shape...I think that you should enter this write sir ! If you do....good luck to ya.......Have a blessed day....much love, james

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/20/2015 4:25:00 AM

This puzzle pieced together presents a lovely picture... love chasing the light! A beautiful passionate piece David! 7

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 2/16/2015 8:43:00 AM

Good morning David.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/15/2015 5:52:00 PM

I like how James likened this one to abstract art. you rock, David~~

James Peranteau

Date: 2/14/2015 9:35:00 PM

This is like searching for the abstract painters muse, it is there, yet one must search for it......great quality....have a great weekend.......much love, james