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The Pursuit

first         r a y s             of                       morning
 

                 night         t e a r s          soaking             my               pillow


             her        l i g h t                                awakens


           bringing            out            deep           l o v e - f l a v o r s



            soul       r e s c u e d      . . .                                      chasing the      light









David Meade
Love Generously

2/11/2015

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Keith Bickerstaffe Date: 11/29/2015 5:29:00 PM Delightful. Your layout and differentiation in word appearance are most effective. '...her light awakens' thank goodness! Well done David! Best wishes, Keith 7 Login to Reply

Samiha Zubair Date: 10/2/2015 9:12:00 AM An inspiring poem Login to Reply

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 4/24/2015 12:56:00 AM Very nice pen David! I truly enjoyed your piece.A7! Thank you for visiting my page.Much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D. Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 4/5/2015 8:06:00 AM love your design of your wonderful poem. a 7. Have a wonderful Happy Easter my friend Eve Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 3/24/2015 6:49:00 AM I enjoyed reading this one again! Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 3/22/2015 10:59:00 PM returning to this one . I like when you write this way! You have the best way of formatting things. Let me go see if I already saw your collab poem or not. Login to Reply

Tim Smith Date: 3/18/2015 1:56:00 PM Came back to reread this beautiful piece...have a blessed day Login to Reply

Arthur Vaso Date: 3/16/2015 9:38:00 PM Fantastic and so creative! Loved this poem! Login to Reply

Jaycee Cervenka Date: 3/12/2015 4:37:00 PM Beautiful example of Tanka with a formatting twist. I like the spaciness of the line. I do not think there are any rules to the formatting for Japanese poetry styles, just the syllabic count. It's good to play with form! Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/12/2015 2:41:00 AM Stopping by to say hi, bring a hug, and of course, look for a new write...I hope soon :) Login to Reply

Charmaine Chircop Date: 3/6/2015 9:43:00 AM How beautiful this is,Yes David!Charma Login to Reply

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 3/2/2015 1:20:00 PM Dear David, I can tell you are a man who truly "loves generously." When we are feeling sad, finding a new love can turn our lives around. Surely, this is a "rescued" soul. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Enjoyed this 7+ write! Best wishes, Carolyn Login to Reply

Debbie Guzzi Date: 2/28/2015 9:02:00 AM You could list this as Free Verse David - or Prose Poetry since Prose poetry can take many different shapes on the page! Good one! Light & Love Login to Reply

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Date: 2/26/2015 9:45:00 AM love each word.. love the format.. and love how each word full the strings of my thoughts and my heart.. :)! lovely!!/olive eloisa :)! Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 2/26/2015 3:32:00 AM I like this lots David sorry for slow reply I have not been well hugs Login to Reply

Meg Anderson Date: 2/24/2015 6:31:00 PM Kinda sad but became thoughtful. It made me smile. whisper in the wind! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 2/23/2015 9:14:00 AM David, I am reading your poem again, it remains wonderful, there is something about those spaces between words that speaks to my soul, and thanks for visiting my poetry, I am working on more poems, I tend to be a slow writer, sometimes taking days to write one poem, not sure why that is but they seem to turn out my best ones ~~ Login to Reply

David Mohn Date: 2/22/2015 8:08:00 PM So much said between the words... simply wonderful Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 2/20/2015 4:06:00 PM Sensually delicious words...chasing the light at dawn. Creative write, David. // paul Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/20/2015 3:22:00 PM Ahh!!.Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 2/20/2015 10:01:00 AM Hello dear poet ! Ya knows....Andea Dietrich, one of our fine poets here on the Soup is holding one of her contests on poems with shape...I think that you should enter this write sir ! If you do....good luck to ya.......Have a blessed day....much love, james Login to Reply

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 2/20/2015 4:25:00 AM This puzzle pieced together presents a lovely picture... love chasing the light! A beautiful passionate piece David! 7 Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 2/16/2015 8:43:00 AM Good morning David. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2015 5:52:00 PM I like how James likened this one to abstract art. you rock, David~~ Login to Reply

James Peranteau Date: 2/14/2015 9:35:00 PM This is like searching for the abstract painters muse, it is there, yet one must search for it......great quality....have a great weekend.......much love, james Login to Reply

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