David Meade Poet I do not know?

The Pursuit

first         r a y s             of                       morning
 

                 night         t e a r s          soaking             my               pillow


             her        l i g h t                                awakens


           bringing            out            deep           l o v e - f l a v o r s



            soul       r e s c u e d      . . .                                      chasing the      light









David Meade
Love Generously

2/11/2015

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Keith Bickerstaffe November 29, 2015 at 5:29 PM Delightful. Your layout and differentiation in word appearance are most effective. '...her light awakens' thank goodness! Well done David! Best wishes, Keith 7

Samiha Zubair October 2, 2015 at 9:12 AM An inspiring poem

Dorian Petersen Potter April 24, 2015 at 12:56 AM Very nice pen David! I truly enjoyed your piece.A7! Thank you for visiting my page.Much appreciated.Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light!God bless you!:)D.

Eve Roper April 5, 2015 at 8:06 AM love your design of your wonderful poem. a 7. Have a wonderful Happy Easter my friend Eve

Richard Lamoureux March 24, 2015 at 6:49 AM I enjoyed reading this one again!

Andrea Dietrich March 22, 2015 at 10:59 PM returning to this one . I like when you write this way! You have the best way of formatting things. Let me go see if I already saw your collab poem or not.

Tim Smith March 18, 2015 at 1:56 PM Came back to reread this beautiful piece...have a blessed day

Arthur Vaso March 16, 2015 at 9:38 PM Fantastic and so creative! Loved this poem!

Jaycee Cervenka March 12, 2015 at 4:37 PM Beautiful example of Tanka with a formatting twist. I like the spaciness of the line. I do not think there are any rules to the formatting for Japanese poetry styles, just the syllabic count. It's good to play with form!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 12, 2015 at 2:41 AM Stopping by to say hi, bring a hug, and of course, look for a new write...I hope soon :)

Charmaine Chircop March 6, 2015 at 9:43 AM How beautiful this is,Yes David!Charma

Carolyn Devonshire March 2, 2015 at 1:20 PM Dear David, I can tell you are a man who truly "loves generously." When we are feeling sad, finding a new love can turn our lives around. Surely, this is a "rescued" soul. Thanks for your comments on my poem. Enjoyed this 7+ write! Best wishes, Carolyn

Debbie Guzzi February 28, 2015 at 9:02 AM You could list this as Free Verse David - or Prose Poetry since Prose poetry can take many different shapes on the page! Good one! Light & Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser February 26, 2015 at 9:45 AM love each word.. love the format.. and love how each word full the strings of my thoughts and my heart.. :)! lovely!!/olive eloisa :)!

Shadow Hamilton February 26, 2015 at 3:32 AM I like this lots David sorry for slow reply I have not been well hugs

Meg Anderson February 24, 2015 at 6:31 PM Kinda sad but became thoughtful. It made me smile. whisper in the wind!

Constance La France February 23, 2015 at 9:14 AM David, I am reading your poem again, it remains wonderful, there is something about those spaces between words that speaks to my soul, and thanks for visiting my poetry, I am working on more poems, I tend to be a slow writer, sometimes taking days to write one poem, not sure why that is but they seem to turn out my best ones ~~

David Mohn February 22, 2015 at 8:08 PM So much said between the words... simply wonderful

Paul Callus February 20, 2015 at 4:06 PM Sensually delicious words...chasing the light at dawn. Creative write, David. // paul

Sara Kendrick February 20, 2015 at 3:22 PM Ahh!!.Enjoyed reading your creative and expressive work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

James Peranteau February 20, 2015 at 10:01 AM Hello dear poet ! Ya knows....Andea Dietrich, one of our fine poets here on the Soup is holding one of her contests on poems with shape...I think that you should enter this write sir ! If you do....good luck to ya.......Have a blessed day....much love, james

Connie Marcum Wong February 20, 2015 at 4:25 AM This puzzle pieced together presents a lovely picture... love chasing the light! A beautiful passionate piece David! 7

Richard Lamoureux February 16, 2015 at 8:43 AM Good morning David.

Andrea Dietrich February 15, 2015 at 5:52 PM I like how James likened this one to abstract art. you rock, David~~

James Peranteau February 14, 2015 at 9:35 PM This is like searching for the abstract painters muse, it is there, yet one must search for it......great quality....have a great weekend.......much love, james

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