The Purple Vault

Peonies plum and white on the table of grace at nigh sundown's scarlet; greet the hour with fragrance as dusk becomes starlit. Peonies plum and white bring joy to the evening of gold tinged memory, from the gemmed purple vault of old time's treasury. Peonies plum and white from the sunlit glory of peach, satin breezes; frills in vanity's vase with a charm that pleases. Peonies plum and white in a hint of gold rays at evening of the noon; as grape shadows turn black in shadows of the moon.
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Rolland Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 1:09 AM
so delicate and delicous reading, your poem has so much elegance, i adore what i read, have a good week poet
Buehler Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 7:05 PM
Your gracious compliments are so appreciated, Yann. Thank you.
Rodgers Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Dear Evelyn, What a beautiful ode to the timeless elegance of peonies. The imagery you've written paints a beautiful picture of nature's elegance, evoking a sense of tranquility and nostalgia. Your words capture the essence of fleeting moments and cherished memories. In my book, this is a poetic masterpiece. - Blessings, Daniel
Buehler Avatar
March 1, 2024 at 4:31 PM
I offer my heartfelt thanks for your warm, thoughtful remarks, my friend. Your words are very encouraging and delightful to read. All good wishes, Evelyn
Andresen Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 10:56 AM
- Beautifully described ... with several shades :) - Best wishes in the contest, Evelyn :) - hugs
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:20 PM
Thank you so much for your gracious comments and well wishes, Anne-Lise. :) hugs
Ashley Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 7:59 AM
Oh, dear Evelyn, the beauty of your monchielle stanza is breathtaking! I love peonies and love your exquisite poem. Every verse a lovely facet to this creative gem. I especially adore the rhyme pair of "scarlet/starlit" (although all your rhyme pairs are amazing) and the verse "frills in vanity's vase". Your poem sparkles with gentle alliterations, vibrant imageries and great use of color. Royalty and purity, adoration and innocence and the joy of enlightenment fills the poetic page. Your brilliant artistry shine, my inspiring friend. A fav! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:17 PM
Your warm words of appreciation delight and inspire me, my dear friend. It was great fun to write in this new form, and I'm very pleased that it is in your faves. Thank you for your lovely compliments. Blessings and hugs. :)
Goldsmith Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:53 AM
A creative write. I really enjoyed reading it.  "Good Luck" Have a fun/great day...............
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:05 PM
Thank you so much for your kind thoughts and well wishes. I hope your evening is nice.
Pandit Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 5:51 AM
Much enjoyed the resplendence of your poem, my friend. Lovely ode to peonies!
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:04 PM
You have my very deep thanks. Best wishes.
Buhagiar Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 10:22 PM
Great first-line repetition. Lovely flowers. Your imagery is always great.
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:02 PM
It's so great to read your very nice comment. Thank you.
Greenhough Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 9:05 PM
Peonies are very dramatic, spell--binding flowers, much like the beautiful words in your poem. Enjoyable to read, I think I'll put it in the favorite folder.
Buehler Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 3:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kind, thoughtful comments, Hilda. I'm also delighted to know this poem is a fave. Blessings.
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