The Purple Door

I passed a purple door one day while out for a casual walk
Curiosity got the best of me when it began to talk

It said it was a magical door and welcomed me inside
It bribed me with indispensable knowledge if I would abide

Only a brief moment of my time it would need
Just step across my threshold it began to plead

I thought for just a minute and wondered if I should 
What really did I have to loose, this might turn out quite good

I clambered up the steps with haste and through the portal I passed
Immediately I was whisked away through a narrow shaft

As I tumbled through the darkness, I faintly heard the door slam shut
A queasy feeling erupted in the bottom of my gut

I shuddered knowing that I had possibly sealed my fate 
What an awful mistake I made, I should have opted for a golden gate

I think my soul was taken, had I completely lost my head
Eternity was upon me, filling me with dread

A second chance I dared wish, as a silent scream danced on my lips
A horrible thought flashed through my mind as I came to grips

I should have kept on walking, never going through that purple door
I certainly didn’t anticipate this and regretted it even more

Had destiny played some cruel prank I truly could not tell
All I know for sure that day, I was sent to hell
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Written 2014-05-21 : alternative ending

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 6/3/2014 2:26:00 AM
I was thinking this might be a dream that seemed real or something....I was intrigued all the way through. I love poems that keep my attention. Welcome to Poetry Soup Sandy!
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Date: 6/3/2014 2:16:00 AM
Sandy, I had to see what Jack had to read 10 times...lol... Love this poem.. Creepy and telling...Arlene..
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Date: 5/29/2014 10:41:00 AM
Hello Sandy, I liked this poem very much indeed, in my opinion you are a very talented poet too, like a lot on this site, I am so glad I came to join it...Keith.
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Date: 5/29/2014 7:45:00 AM
Dear Sandy, As Purple Door poured from your pen, I was reminded again, life is full of second chances while darkness is unforgiving. You are an amazing writer! My best to you, chuck
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Date: 5/28/2014 8:25:00 AM
Wow, what an introduction to Soup. Nice poem.
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:51:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sandy. Quite a powerful, thought provoking poem. I believe you will find much support here. Keep writing; comment on the poems of other writers and most of them will return the favor. Best wishes.
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Date: 5/27/2014 6:36:00 PM
Ah the choices one has to chose in life, you never know where they will go until it is too late. great write chicky
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Date: 5/27/2014 10:10:00 AM
A tremendous piece of work... Beautifully written! Love the flow and build up all the way to the end.
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:08:00 AM
Oh, my, Sandy! It DOES appear you and I are of kindred spirits (poetically speaking). This is a great write, and takes the reader on an interesting and macabre journey. I will be looking forward to your next entries here on Poetry Soup! Jack C
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Date: 5/27/2014 9:45:00 AM
Thanks Jack, I like your poetry, one of my favorites is The Day In The Park :) also I could relate a lot to The Mirror :)
Date: 5/27/2014 7:00:00 AM
Well done - great write!
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Date: 5/27/2014 3:35:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sandy :) - I choose your first great written rhyme poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Sandy Bird
Date: 5/27/2014 4:41:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome. I am not into drama so I think poetry soup will be a perfect fit :) Look forward to sharing and reading too :) Nice to meet you Anne-Lise
Date: 5/26/2014 8:20:00 PM
Hi Sandy, epic, writes., Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 5/27/2014 4:43:00 AM
Nice to meet you Skat, thanks for the sweet welcome. Look forward to getting to know you too.
Date: 5/26/2014 5:02:00 PM
Awesome, story and ending choice. .Sandy, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Sandy Bird
Date: 5/27/2014 4:49:00 AM
Thanks for the warm welcome Linda. I look forward to the feedback to help me grow as a writer. The second ending line for the poem read "But the moment I hit the ground I realized I had tripped and it hurt like hell" I personally liked both :) I will check out the contest, thanks for the invite
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