The Ptsd Beat

thin skin and taut thought

                                            cowering

                                  drumsticks everywhere
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Alexander Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 11:12 AM
What a thought provoking and realistic view of this horrible condition
Pigeon Tart Avatar
April 8, 2019 at 2:56 PM
Thank you Gordon, I thought you might appreciate this one. Keep well my friend. xomo
Vaso Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 12:13 AM
I bet you love the sound of silence!!!, the song I mean!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 28, 2018 at 5:55 AM
That and the other ;) xomo
Cunningham Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 1:37 PM
Must be terrible having to cope with extreme noise Maureen, I hope you find real peace. Tom
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 3:08 PM
It is an extreme reaction, with rest it should abate. Thank you my friend, xomo
Deo Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 11:00 PM
this FIRST line is masterfully wrought; the unforgettable deeds make the term "collective human pain body" another way toward HEALING for all SURVIVORS/overcomers. Shalom & Witnessed Silences
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 6:37 AM
Thank you Anil. Trying to describe the fragile over sensitized state. Our body and minds are indistinguishable to trauma, be it mental, emotional, or physical.
Talbot Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 10:03 PM
bombs drop... folk screaming... bodies everywhere... WHY WHY WHY!!!!!!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 6:41 AM
Lol ;) PTSD a symptom of PCS, how the brain rewires itself after a physical trauma. In fact PTSD symptoms can occur after serious physical trauma to any part of the body, not just the head. Family history of depression, previous emotional trauma etc make one more susceptible. That said fingers crossed, I've never been in a war zone. xomo
Man Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:56 PM
This hits home within my extended family!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 27, 2018 at 6:47 AM
Tendresse xomo
Turner Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 6:07 PM
Great description, Mo. PTSD is a very serious matter.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:12 PM
Thank you Daniel. It is a formidable fact of our human condition. And with that, some extra hugs ;) xomo o o o
Rose  Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 5:01 PM
PTSD is a serious matter, so many struggle with it
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 9:07 PM
It is, and especially so with the shame that so often comes with it. xomo
Neels Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:27 PM
Absolutely love the description Maureen :) xoxo
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 3:29 PM
Thank you Wilma! :) xomo
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June 26, 2018 at 3:09 PM
With this piece originally named "Noise Complaint" I fear the intended meaning was obscured by metaphor.
Green Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:43 PM
Ha! The drummers always get the blame. :) Fun my friend
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:54 PM
It's the beat that travels ;) xomo Lovely to see you Chris! A splendid day to you! xomo
Trifiatis Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:04 PM
What a way to describe the perception of an annoying noise dear. Maureen!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 2:53 PM
Thank you Demetrios. When it's bad, it's really bad ;) xomo
Smith Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 12:38 PM
Dang drummers
Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 26, 2018 at 1:17 PM
Lol! Yeah. Not in my house. I can't even handle dishes clanking; and you think that'd be music to my ears. ;)
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