Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Verse

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- The Psychopath Rarely Cries -

Her thoughts rolls as a high-speed rail
                     with the sound of heartbeat and pumping pulses
                     He has planned a murder down to the last detail
                   without a hint of guilty conscience - leaves no trace






24.03.2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Writing Challenge 5
Four Lines - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Dear Heart
3rd place in the contest

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Phatt Matt September 11, 2019 at 9:19 PM Another great and dark masterpiece well done ~ Matt Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2019 at 4:16 AM - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Phatt :) - Many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France March 29, 2019 at 5:53 PM Annie-Lise, congratulations on your win in my contest with this wonderfully penned piece, very dark and deep ! Anne-Lise Andresen March 30, 2019 at 3:58 PM - You have great contest, D.H. ... many thanks for my place on your winning list :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 27, 2019 at 3:34 PM here to greet you congrats, anne... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2019 at 4:25 AM - Many thanks for the congrats, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Smith March 27, 2019 at 2:50 PM Excellent poem Anne-Lise, a great dark read. :) Anne-Lise Andresen March 27, 2019 at 2:57 PM - Many thanks Gary, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Arthur Vaso March 25, 2019 at 10:32 PM Sometimes even silent ones leave a trace!!! Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2019 at 4:49 AM - Many thanks Arthur, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger March 25, 2019 at 9:33 PM Perfecto! I am blowing you kisses off the edge of my fingers. Trixie is kicking her feet in the air with glee that you have gotten into the mind of one of those. Anne-Lise Andresen March 26, 2019 at 4:48 AM - Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. March 25, 2019 at 8:29 AM You've nailed it Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 8:38 AM - Thank you very much, Allen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud March 24, 2019 at 4:29 PM eerie and yet marvelously penned, anne... you have a thriller here..... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 1:14 AM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Hagy March 24, 2019 at 3:45 PM Interesting title!... I guess I can't be phycho then, cause I sure know how to cry :0... powerful, scary, and unfortunately true...nice job! Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 8:39 AM - Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison March 24, 2019 at 3:42 PM oh gosh Anne Lise its so rare to see you move over to the dark side, the imagery is so chilling it must be unfortunate to meet someone with a psychopathic tendencies:-( hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen March 25, 2019 at 8:40 AM - I have some "dark moments", Jan :))) - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit March 24, 2019 at 2:27 PM Evil man he is..amazing how a psychotic mind works..best for a win, Anne-Lise. Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 2:54 PM - A psychopath is a human being who is deprived of all human traits, such as love, empathy, conscience and reflection .... scary to think of ... it can be anyone - Many thanks Vijay, for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus March 24, 2019 at 2:11 PM Your title drew me in, Anne-Lise, and I was definitely not disappointed!Now,for some reason I keep looking over my shoulder! Hugs // paul Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 2:44 PM - A few weeks ago we had an ax murder here in our little town, Paul - He killed a lady who visited the family's tomb (at daytime ) - With an 8-year old boy who witnessed ... so cruel and shocking ! - Many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis March 24, 2019 at 1:26 PM You stood up to the challenge by creating such a thunderous poem dearest, Anne-Lise ! Hugs xxx Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 2:49 PM - Many thanks for your friendly visit and wonderful comment my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Castellenas March 24, 2019 at 1:24 PM Wow. You said everything needed in so few words. A outstanding poem. Anne-Lise Andresen March 24, 2019 at 2:31 PM - Many thanks for the first comment, John ... always interesting and exciting to hear what others think about my poems :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)