The Proposal

On his knee proposed,

The mother in her was moved,

Future is assured!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
   13 January 2016

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 1/14/2016 7:22:00 PM
Wonderful haiku. That's a touching event and that's cool how you explained it in 3 lines... simply great!
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Date: 1/14/2016 7:25:00 PM
It becomes simpler when you repeat it, my new friend J.W. E.! Haha. Thank you for your visit and comment!
Date: 1/13/2016 2:57:00 PM
nicely written.....
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:00:00 AM
Thank you my friend, LL!
Date: 1/13/2016 10:25:00 AM
he proposed in such nice way...excellent write Demetrios
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:01:00 AM
Yes, his way was perfect! Thank you, White Sage, for visiting and commenting!
Date: 1/13/2016 10:10:00 AM
:) There are times when a woman loves to mother her man....It musn't always have a negative connotation. Sometimes it is a very beautiful thing to baby a man. Hugs
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:07:00 AM
Yes, it is true, dear Eileen. Some women and some men like it and that is fine. My writing was focusing on woman's desire to become a mother was a decisive factor to accept the proposal. Thank you my dearest, for your lovely visit.
Date: 1/13/2016 9:49:00 AM
very nicely expressed,Sir.
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Date: 1/14/2016 8:08:00 AM
So glad to see you after that long a time, my friend, Miraj! Thank you for your surprise visit!
Date: 1/13/2016 7:32:00 AM
We all need a bit of mothering.
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Date: 1/13/2016 7:59:00 AM
Yes, Richard, some of us need a little and some a lot! Ha-ha. Thank you my friend!
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