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The Proposal

On his knee proposed,

The mother in her was moved,

Future is assured!




© Demetrios Trifiatis
   13 January 2016

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David William Breidenthal

January 14, 2016 at 7:22 PM

Wonderful haiku. That's a touching event and that's cool how you explained it in 3 lines... simply great!

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 14, 2016 at 7:25 PM

It becomes simpler when you repeat it, my new friend J.W. E.! Haha. Thank you for your visit and comment!

Legendary Legend

January 13, 2016 at 2:57 PM

nicely written.....

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 14, 2016 at 8:00 AM

Thank you my friend, LL!

White Sage

January 13, 2016 at 10:25 AM

he proposed in such nice way...excellent write Demetrios

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 14, 2016 at 8:01 AM

Yes, his way was perfect! Thank you, White Sage, for visiting and commenting!

Eileen Manassian

January 13, 2016 at 10:10 AM

:) There are times when a woman loves to mother her man....It musn't always have a negative connotation. Sometimes it is a very beautiful thing to baby a man. Hugs

Demetrios Trifiatis

January 14, 2016 at 8:07 AM

Yes, it is true, dear Eileen. Some women and some men like it and that is fine. My writing was focusing on woman's desire to become a mother was a decisive factor to accept the proposal. Thank you my dearest, for your lovely visit.