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Double Etheree for Empress's contest.     5th June 2025

The Proposal

Rings Love now My heart sings Our wedding vow Will always love you You make my life complete By every small thing you do With you, I never feel defeat Beautiful one please be mine for life With loving eyes, say you will be my wife I will make a garden filled with delight Hope and respect planted side by side Our garden will thrive on love's light Devoted faith grown with pride Darling, will you accept? I'm on bended knee Promises kept You for me A plus Us
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Andresen Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 8:47 AM
- So beautifully written... love it :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, When I see your hugs I smile for ages. Hope you are having a great day. Luv your kind words and MY HUG ! :)
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