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Double Etheree for Empress's contest.     5th June 2025

Rings Love now My heart sings Our wedding vow Will always love you You make my life complete By every small thing you do With you, I never feel defeat Beautiful one please be mine for life With loving eyes, say you will be my wife I will make a garden filled with delight Hope and respect planted side by side Our garden will thrive on love's light Devoted faith grown with pride Darling, will you accept? I'm on bended knee Promises kept You for me A plus Us

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Date: 6/4/2025 4:29:00 PM
Pretty doubler with a sweet, endearing message SV
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Tom Woody
Date: 6/4/2025 6:07:00 PM
She'll give in. Just watch
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/4/2025 5:48:00 PM
I have an awful feeling by the look on her face, that she isn't going to say "yes". Thanx for the "thumbs up" Tom. Have a good day !
Date: 6/4/2025 8:47:00 AM
- So beautifully written... love it :) - hugs
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Speaks Volumes
Date: 6/4/2025 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise, When I see your hugs I smile for ages. Hope you are having a great day. Luv your kind words and MY HUG ! :)

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