The Promised Land

tapped into a beautiful thought ~ tempted by the teat of a nightmare


By
David Kavanagh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Flaherty Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 11:47 AM
Pinky promise
Kavanagh  Avatar
March 1, 2022 at 12:14 PM
With a gel pack implant
Wolf Avatar
December 19, 2021 at 6:25 PM
Your monokus certainly do titillate...
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 1:49 AM
Naughty boy Gershon, that thought honesty never entered my mind somehow, cheers David
Sambourne Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 6:42 AM
A gem! Thought provoking doesn't do justice to this intriguing one liner. Congratulations! Brian
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 18, 2021 at 9:10 AM
Thank you Brian, I was on the cusp of sleep, when I dragged it back from no mans land, cheers David
Cunningham Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 1:51 AM
Yikes, avoid strong cheese before bed lol. Tom
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 17, 2021 at 2:23 AM
Heya Tom, pizza usually does the trick, if you want to go trippin’, I had an abstract Dali image in mind writing this one, cheers David
Roper Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 3:53 PM
deep thought , David.
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 16, 2021 at 3:56 PM
And I’m about to go to sleep Eve, one to ponder over cheers David
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