The Promised Land

tapped into a beautiful thought ~ tempted by the teat of a nightmare By David Kavanagh

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 12/20/2021 11:47:00 AM

Pinky promise

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/1/2022 12:14:00 PM

With a gel pack implant

Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/19/2021 6:25:00 PM

Your monokus certainly do titillate...

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/20/2021 1:49:00 AM

Naughty boy Gershon, that thought honesty never entered my mind somehow, cheers David

Brian Sambourne

Date: 12/18/2021 6:42:00 AM

A gem! Thought provoking doesn't do justice to this intriguing one liner. Congratulations! Brian

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/18/2021 9:10:00 AM

Thank you Brian, I was on the cusp of sleep, when I dragged it back from no mans land, cheers David

Tom Cunningham

Date: 12/17/2021 1:51:00 AM

Yikes, avoid strong cheese before bed lol. Tom

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/17/2021 2:23:00 AM

Heya Tom, pizza usually does the trick, if you want to go trippin’, I had an abstract Dali image in mind writing this one, cheers David

Eve Roper

Date: 12/16/2021 3:53:00 PM

deep thought , David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 12/16/2021 3:56:00 PM

And I’m about to go to sleep Eve, one to ponder over cheers David