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The Promise of the Night

The promise of the night Hides her as she takes flight Down the valley of the shadow Where her lover waits below Leaving all she knows behind Hoping for a chance to find True love in the moonlight In the promise of the night Gone are the fears of her flight In the promise of the night Locked in love's embrace Moon's love light on her face

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Date: 1/17/2022 8:21:00 PM
So sweet ~ lovely rhyme. Well penned, Timothy.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/18/2022 3:48:00 PM
Thank you once again for your kinds words and support! :) <3
Date: 1/10/2022 9:04:00 PM
I like the way you used that repeated line. This one leaves us with a sense of mystery. Enjoyed :)
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/11/2022 1:20:00 AM
Thank you P.S. I hope all is well with you and yours.
Date: 1/10/2022 12:09:00 AM
A romantic meeting in the moonlight, loved the imagery Timothy. Hope your new year is off to a good start. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/10/2022 7:54:00 PM
Not bad friend, I hope the same to you and yours. Thanks

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