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The Promise

Enshrined on tapestry crimson, ruby Purple love scintillates orchid dreams Flaunting sensuality of magical appeal Waltzing sweet melodies of romance; Oh, fondly I recall our first kiss now-- It was the promise of amethyst dawn! Swaying in colors of pink, red tulips Love in the prairies of yellow daffodils Setting its sights upon indigo iris Dazzles verdant fields on butterfly wings; Oh, playfully I recall the allure of tease-- It was the promise of vibrant spring! Embrace of love on the opulent horizon Watching orange glow dip in the ocean Glittering emotions as gilded waves beckon Spurs in twilight arousal of passions; Oh, gaily I recall the crush of nightfall-- It was the promise of quixotic sundown! Love yearning for blazing red meadows Whirling desires fiery amber, brown Gazing at fervor of mulberry evening Seduces your aura, caressing feelings; Oh, happily I recall the dalliance of fall-- It was the promise of autumnal awe! But the promise I treasure adoringly now Was enunciated in the epigram of stars By the prophecy of moon scripted above; Oh, intimately I recall bliss of Shangri-la-- It was the promise of two loving hearts! June 2, 2020 Placed 1st: The promise poetry contest by Silent One Placed 3rd: Brian's Select 9 Contest

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Date: 1/1/2022 8:10:00 PM
When two hearts are in love nature and seasons carry a special charm ! You have created a heavenly ambiance. 'Oh, fondly I recall our first kiss now-- It was the promise of amethyst dawn'! Love this refrain at the end of each stanza.
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Date: 6/6/2020 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love the choice of captivating words and stunning images. Love the ending line of each stanza! That makes the poem irresistible!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/7/2020 9:56:00 AM
Much appreciate, Malabika--many thanks.
Date: 6/6/2020 12:59:00 PM
Love the enchanting effect of your words. You paint the picture of a blissful promise of love with your gorgeous imagery and beautiful emotions. How splendidly it flows from every phase and season! Amazing poetry. Congratulations on your win Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 2:25:00 PM
So very kind of you Aditi--much appreciate your feedback--many thanks.
Date: 6/6/2020 11:19:00 AM
A promise made between two beautiful hearts is bound to be up for a lst win - congratulations dear friend. Jennifer
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 2:24:00 PM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate.
Date: 6/6/2020 7:28:00 AM
So happy your promise was fulfilled, your poem is full of romantic lines, creating beautiful imagery.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/6/2020 2:24:00 PM
Thank you, SO..much appreciate your kind feedback. many thanks.
Date: 6/4/2020 2:14:00 PM
now that sure was a promise painted so very beautifully by your pen wishing you a blessed week vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2020 2:42:00 PM
Much appreciate Liam--many thanks.
Date: 6/4/2020 9:19:00 AM
"The promise of two loving hearts"! With the vibrancy of a heart of a lover.. with the warmth and bliss of memories.. with the endless charm of seasons.. with the rainbow of unique colours.. all the promises are, not just cherished memories, rather a tangible living realty, a great poetry, that deeply delight the reader's senses! An amazing poetry, dear Vijay! and a great pleasure to read! Best regards. God bless you.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2020 10:38:00 AM
Delighted by your feedback Besma--always happy to read your comments..many thanks. Regards.
Date: 6/3/2020 10:54:00 PM
You always create such beautiful images with your words. "the promise of two loving hearts!" And that is the way it should be. This is so beautiful and romantic. It is Poetry in Motion. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/4/2020 10:38:00 AM
So very kind of you, Brandy--always a pleasure to read your comments--many thanks.
Date: 6/3/2020 10:15:00 AM
Vijay, I really love the way you threaded the theme of a promise through the different elements, so well crafted and full of your exceptional imagery! Best of luck !!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 11:21:00 AM
So very kind of you Mike--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/3/2020 8:34:00 AM
(((NICE)))...^WW^ :o)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you WW--much appreciate.
Date: 6/3/2020 7:42:00 AM
Wow, fantastic imagery! Left me breathless. Goodluck for the win.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 10:01:00 AM
So very kind of you--much appreciate the kind remarks--many thanks, JCB.
Date: 6/3/2020 5:11:00 AM
A whirlpool of beautiful verses that invites the soul to admire your poetic exaltation dear, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 6:49:00 AM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/3/2020 1:16:00 AM
Such a wonderful romantic piece!! I'm still dancing amidst your ecstatic words!!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 6:48:00 AM
Thank you Swetha--much appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 6/2/2020 6:28:00 PM
the dalliance of fall. That was SO cool!! Many great lines of imagery in this one. I enjoyed how each verse ended with It was the promise of...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/3/2020 6:47:00 AM
Much appreciate Andrea your kind feedback. Many thanks.
Date: 6/2/2020 4:40:00 PM
this charms me no end in an otherwise bleak tableau...incredibly penned!...stay safe and huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2020 5:28:00 PM
Much appreciate, Nette--many thanks.
Date: 6/2/2020 1:50:00 PM
Hello Vijay pandit, this is so romantic. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2020 5:27:00 PM
Thank you Darlene--much appreciate, my friend.
Date: 6/2/2020 8:52:00 AM
Very nicely done Vijay, best wishes in the contest..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2020 5:27:00 PM
Many thanks Joseph--much appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 6/2/2020 7:37:00 AM
You are the master of romance and imagery Vijay. Brilliantly composed, Good luck in the contest Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2020 5:27:00 PM
That is so nice to hear--much appreciate your kind remarks, Tom--many thanks.
Date: 6/2/2020 6:31:00 AM
Colourful and visual as ever; great progression, great way to end ! Nice one, my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/2/2020 5:26:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend..much appreciate your visit and comments..many thanks, Lawrence.

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