The Process

I stand cold and sterile, almost medical
Like a cadavar or a mannequin 
A sea of moons eclipsing periodically
They look like beads, floating on a sea of plates
Why are people so white in a glare when naturally 
They're so dull and grey like so much ash?
Light is a liar. Light is deceptive. 
Under such a tide of it I must look virginal
I am stripped and sink into the sickness I feel welling deep within me

Like porcelein, I am naked
Surrounding myself with a case of words 
All of them written in my childish handwriting
Like some form of finger-painting made by lonesome lepers for the blind
Awaiting critique as I slowly drown

We do what we must do
And écorché ourselves in the process.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryusaka Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 2:01 PM
PS we definitely DO need to be published =]
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June 20, 2009 at 1:59 PM
Perfect. I love every image you evoke to get your point across... the ending left me seriously breathless (although I admit, I had to look up ecorche). Every line is amazingly potent and raw... just beautiful, Nathaniel. =] and I just recently got my laptop back in working order as well (after all my files and documents were erased ={ ) so don't feel bad, lol.
Devonshire Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 1:18 PM
Very compelling thoughts about the deceptive quality of glaring light. In this type of light we must all appear "stripped," exposed to the world as we await critique. Insightful images and a deep message in a well-penned poem, Nathaniel! Love, Carolyn
Guzzi Avatar
June 20, 2009 at 12:43 PM
stunning..almost too clear...I have a verse by the same title..totall different subject. Loved this line "Like some form of finger-painting made by lonesome lepers for the blind Awaiting critique as I slowly drown" Light & Love
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