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The Prisoner

** A protest against the hypocrisy of the death penalty and the decadent environment of the prison system where a simple thief or criminal is unleashed on society upon leaving worse than they went in** The days are short and gentle in the pillow of truth; gentle like rain-fallen feathers, yet the gallows bleed and the hangman smiles at justice unjust, and his lazy solution: that death brings life Death, brings life to the children of judgment --- life, then death and prison be not cruel enough --- awash to the brim, undeterred ---- by the hangman's promise Like a rat the prisoner awaits in a cell built by cruelty and fear --- that our most precious things be stolen by mere hands By mere hands we have built this place; shackle, lock and bar, cold, with empty promises and rigid worry and desolate hope --- we esteem the prisoner shall not return, though his soul is filled with tears; and the day seeming not his friend --- alone, the night speaks to him yet he knows that day will come again Who are we to poison hope? Who are we to celebrate the pain of another? Is this not the very thing we punish?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/17/2017 4:45:00 AM
In the proceas of posting a collab about someone of death row... like you I hold the same views... But i do have mix feelings about it ..
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/26/2018 12:35:00 PM
There are many scary people out there who deserve a good execution --- I believe many should just be put against a wall and shot, but is this is practical deterrent? Do they really think a vicious killer has the rational mind to avoid his sickness for fear of the death penalty? How many mobsters think this way? I heard it many times from people --- ' I don't care If I go to jail for this --- sure Now you don't care --- but you will when you stand before a judge. Irrational people act out on their impulses, not a sense of consequence. Here in Canada we have a council of well educated individuals who every so often decide if we need the death penalty, it is always declined because it will change nothing.
Date: 4/7/2017 5:15:00 PM
(Somewhat) in a spirit of humor, a return visit to say that the Hangman should set up by the side of the road, to attend to those who go slow in the fast lane. ; )
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Date: 3/26/2017 3:45:00 PM
Keith, a 7 here from me. : ) Massively good write. Provokes much discussion, yes - I will say that the U.S. imprisons an insane amount of people with demonstrably bad effects, along with wasting billions of Dollars and untold time and resources. There are some things I would argue with you about, but they are relatively few in number and less-than-pervasive. Meanwhile, non-violent drug offenders, for a good example, go in often and often for many years....
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 3/26/2017 5:18:00 PM
Many thanks for your kind comments and visit Doug. The prison system is supposed to be a correctional facility, not some hellish torture chamber. When one really thinks about it those who break the laws of their country are traitors; a more cutting approach would be to stencil the word: TRAITOR on the front of prison uniforms. Maybe some would actually 'get it'.
Date: 1/20/2017 12:33:00 PM
Very powerfully expressed viewpoint my friend.. I wrestle with this one.. To be a Christian, one has to except Jesus and his new teachings where the old laws are concerned, but I can't see what we are expected to do with the unrepentant, unreformable murderers in our society. I don't believe society should be responsible for their well being.. I do respect your opinion, tho and love the way you presented it here..
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/20/2017 1:42:00 PM
There was a secret experiment done to see if 3 perfectly healthy and rational men would be affected by their environment in prison for a year; all 3 were completely changed for the worse...
Date: 1/20/2017 3:55:00 AM
I agree with my friend Brett. You're writing is quality reading material. And the Seeker should be called The Overly Opinionated Bible of Self-Righteous.... Delusional .. Hit You Over the Head... .With Thoughts of How Judgement ...Sits in Front of the Interpretation of Imperfection.....In His Humanity.
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Keith O.J. Hunt
Date: 1/20/2017 6:18:00 PM
Thanks so very much Holly; many thanks to Brett as well. I think my rebuttal with a very important Commandment was suffice. One cannot serve 2 gods...
Date: 1/20/2017 12:12:00 AM
Nice critique of our prison system. I fear what will happen next - after tomorrow Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/18/2017 1:50:00 PM
This is refreshing. Not the subject matter of course but the writing quality, and I suppose message.
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Date: 1/18/2017 11:11:00 AM
forceful write that sends a message of might, keith...carry on!..huggs
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