The Pride That Died

Maelore, King of the Mountain, owning the Mountain’s Wealth
This summer heat has been brutal, affecting the Lions Health
His mistresses, Miss Kitty, Bernadette, the renegade Linda Sioux
The weasels, chipmunks, squirrels and rabbits stay out of Maelore’s view 
Chewing on a Milkweed  does nothing for Maelore the mountain King
The growl of an empty stomach is the only song starvation will sing
Now the Moutain King, Loves his ladies : He only aims to Please
At Farmer Brown’s there’s chicken for delicious “Chicken Fricassee”
Now Maelore told Miss Kitty; under the light of the bright full Moon
“When they wake up, tell Bernadette and Linda Sioux I’ll be back real soon
A Shotgun Blast ominously echoes across the Mountain’s Forest Floor
Miss Kitty, Bernadette, the renegade Linda Sioux, would see Maelore :
                                      N E V E R M O R E 

HGarvey  Daniel Esquire Wrote this for Constance ~ The Ramblling POET’S ~
  Contest “  Cat Poems “  Dedicated to Constance, Barbara, and Linda-Marie

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/7/2010 12:22:00 PM
Blast that shotgun!
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:58:00 AM
Hey, this is quite a tale, HG, filled with images of the mountain and its colorfully crafted creatures. NCreative approach to the cat contest! I actually had a cat named "Miss Kitty" long ago. Wishing you the best in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:24:00 AM
HG, you clever man..this is certainly creative, clever and so YOU..good one. Love, BG
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:43:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your poetry HG my forever friend. Poets here offer such diverse writings and to me it is a pleasure to read each and everyone. I will not be here at the Soup to read from Friday through Monday. I hope you will find mountains of inspiration during that time. I look forward to reading when I return. Have a great weekend. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:19:00 AM
Very wonderful entry for the cat contest, HG
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