The Pretty Moon!

In calm springy night,
The beautiful moon up there
Silent is lulu.
Yet, the two old gorillas,
Some ugly frogs make noisy
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Rodrigues Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Interesting and humorous !
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 7:00 AM
Thank you! We need humorous writes and poems, do not we?. Have a nice day.
Vaso Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 1:21 AM
Hey I am an ugly frog! , loved this.
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 7, 2026 at 7:01 AM
LOL. Me too, sometimes though :-) Thank you! Have a nice day.
Parveen Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 11:38 AM
It’s definitely unique and gave me a good laugh, the jump from a peaceful moon to "ugly frogs" is a fun surprise!
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 4:33 PM
LOL Because, your comment supported my poem!
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 11:27 AM
Hello A.A. You really have a good imagination for this poem. i enjoy to watch the moon. blessings my friend. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 6, 2026 at 11:01 AM
Hello AA , I hope all is well with you. Your welcome. blessings my cfrind. /Darlene/
Alhemaidy Avatar
May 5, 2026 at 4:34 PM
Hello dear friend :-) Thank you! Blessings and have a nice day!
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