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Author's Notes: "The Present," is a Heroic Couplet I wrote and set in Iambic Pentameter. I wrote this poem as a follow-on to the heroic couplet I finished and posted yesterday on "The Past." This write looks at the eternal time continuum from a present perspective, and focuses on the very fleeting nature of the "now" moments which are reflective of actions occurring in the present progressive mode. The final heroic couplet in this trilogy, "The Future," I have planned to write over the next day or so. Its emphasis will be on the nature of planned or spontaneous events as they unfold for people in the future on the time continuum beyond what has occurred in the past and the present. (Gary Bateman - December 26, 2014) (Heroic Couplet in Iambic Pentameter)

Categories: allegory, change, imagery, journey, metaphor, time, and wisdom.

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The Present A fleeting moment in eternal time, And ever progressive in real-time. One’s “now” moment, then in history past, Now in motion moving to future fast. My words become history when I write, No need to worry now—I’ll make them right. As the present is present progressive, The past then follows now so possessive. The night stars are past in a mere eye blink, Their images not part of “present” sync. A constant portent of events to come, As we each live “now” in what we’ll become. Give me your hand for this moment is it; Let’s seize now this moment and live in it. Gary Bateman, Copyright © All Rights Reserved (December 26, 2014) (Heroic Couplet)

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Choene Alley Semenya

Date: 2/11/2015 5:15:00 AM

Nice piece of work Gary. I love it!

Gary Bateman
Date: 2/11/2015 5:46:00 AM

Thanks Choene!! I plan to do more of these. With seven couplet stanzas in iambic pentameter, one has 14 verses which mirror somewhat the Shakespearean Sonnet even though the are different approaches. I always like to analysis stuff like this figure out which approach I want to follow. I'm thrilled you like this particular write. Best Wishes, Gary

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/27/2014 2:16:00 PM

A lovely pen about the present. So true.

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 3:23:00 PM

Thanks ML, glad you liked this piece on the "present." Cheers, Gary

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/27/2014 1:56:00 PM

truly golden piece of writing gary excellent pen pal wishing you a great night

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 3:22:00 PM

Liam Mate!! Glad you liked this one. Best, Gary

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 12/27/2014 6:52:00 AM

Hello Gary! What a gem of an excellent piece you've penned here. Wow!Reading it I have to agree with you since every moment, every split of a second of our lives is so fleeting indeed. This is a very deep subject to tackle and you've done so well. Time just flies away! I really enjoyed your "The Present" poem its so well crafted by you my dearest friend Gary. A gigantic 7 from me! Your pen is gold! And thank you so much for visiting me today and commenting so beautifully in many of my poems. Much appreciated from the bottom of my very heart. I wish you and Ingrid a very Happy New Year 2015! May be the best for you to come! Have a wonderful day! :) Love and hugs! xoxxxox D.

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 9:01:00 AM

Hello D!! Thanks for your wonderful comment!! I say: "Tempus fugit, sed amor reliquias." -OR- in English: "Time flies, but love remains." This could be the moral from all three of these writes I just finished: The Past, The Present, and The Future. (I just posted "The Future" over an hour ago. You should read it too!!) Best Always XOXOXO, Gary

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/27/2014 4:40:00 AM

My own definition of present, mein freund Gary, is this: Present is the instance the future changes into past! I see you become more and more philosophical! You have really captured the "reality" of time my friend and for this a seven is well deserved! Excellent, deep and powerful writing!

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/27/2014 5:37:00 AM

Hello Demetrios!! Thanks so much for your most thoughtful comments here. I do like your definition of the "Present" too!! You may want to also read "The Past" (I posted on 25 Dec), in addition to "The Future" (which I will post very soon today, 27 Dec). All three heroic couplets portray "my poet's view" of past, present and future in the human time continuum. All Philosophical!! Happy Holidays, Gary

Arthur Vaso

Date: 12/26/2014 6:07:00 PM

At first I thought this was about my Christmas present! Beautiful poem Gary!

Gary Bateman
Date: 12/26/2014 10:39:00 PM

Thanks Arthur for your read. Sorry to disappoint you on your "present," but at you got to read "The Present." Best Always, Gary