The Prayer Book

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Lord I came to you empty handed.
No prayer book today.
I ask myself what shall I pray to you
without the help of compositions
written by people  much better than I?
 
I know you do not really care
what I recite from books,
especially when such prayers
are quickly read not meditated, 
with distractions all around.
For my mind keeps wandering
on inconsequential things,
or very often concentrated
on frivolous supplications for me.
 
But now I am at loss.
What should I pray?
Let's see Lord if I can think.
For look, this world is evil.
Please forgive our hardheartedness.
Do not look upon our wrongs,
but rather receive our good.
In this respect O Lord,
I offer you your Son,
His tattered body on the cross,
His royal blood shed to the last drop.
I offer you His Soul and Divinity,
in atonement of our sins
and those of the whole world.
For we are all your children Lord,
and without your help we are mere failures.
 
There Lord, I can say no more.
Please accept my offering.
And may I hope next time
I won't forget my prayer book?
Or should I?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 1/24/2021 10:01:00 AM
An exquisite poem, Victor, with such a core truth-to-spirit that my soul ached. I take my prayer book seriously loved as well, but, you know, after the sermon I heard today online by Steven Furtick Elevation Church,I think Godmight prefer the “wandering” to hear that you mentioned. More info in it... sally
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Date: 1/14/2021 11:37:00 AM
This was a wonderful prayer! God is smiling!
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Date: 1/13/2021 9:48:00 PM
Do we really need our pray book, for spoken words that really come form the heart and the honesty of giving your all to him is more meaningful. Perfect prayer , Victor, you made me feel like I was the one coming to Him on my knees. Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/13/2021 7:45:00 PM
One can hardly do better than returning the love the Lord gave to us. Beautiful poem! :=)
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:42:00 PM
Victor, Prayers from the devout. Such good questions of good, bad, and forgiveness. There's much to reflect on in this poem. -Richard
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Date: 1/13/2021 11:44:00 AM
Hi Victor, You have penned such authentic prayer, straight from the heart. I am thankful that I read this today, my friend:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/13/2021 10:21:00 AM
- Talk to God from your heart ... (I have never seen a prayer book) ... He will always listen, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/13/2021 5:35:00 AM
Most sincere prayer requires no written word. Brilliantly you captured the essence of thoughts emanating from the man at prayer, Victor. Enjoyed this dedication in words of faith.
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Date: 1/13/2021 3:11:00 AM
You pray from your heart, yes prayer books help but its more personal to God when it comes from within your heart. Tom
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:50:00 AM
I believe that prayer books are helpful to some extent but God wants us to say what's in our heart. First we must offer praise for His wondrous goodness and mercy and that He is all powerful. Let Him know we stand in awe of Him. Then give Him our supplications. I rather think that since we are His children He wants us to come to Him as Our Father who loves us so very much. Great write here Victor and love the pic. A man never stands so tall as when he is on his knees before God. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/13/2021 1:43:00 AM
Yes forget the prayer book... this is rich in grace and joy and faith. I enjoyed it so much. God bless you dear Victor
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