The Power of Words

I lately wrote some poems to declare
my joy to be inhabiting this earth.
I found my words, if numerous or spare,
inadequate to capture living's worth.

I chose the rondeau and the triolet,                           
appealing forms to help me speak my heart
on love of life with clarity and wit
in phrases neither syrupy nor tart.

When efforts failed, I tried the villanelle
and then the kyrielle to help me say
how much I care for those with whom I dwell
and know I'm blessed to waken here each day.

   In striving to express the depths we feel,
   it's at the throne of language we must kneel.


May 19, 2023
Sponsor: Sotto Poet
Contest Name: Sonnet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kauffman Avatar
June 14, 2023 at 10:13 AM
Back with congratulations for your win! Blessings.
Poet Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 10:55 AM
This piece is truly remarkable and commands great power. I extend my warmest congratulations for your well-deserved Win.
Kendrick Avatar
May 28, 2023 at 3:20 PM
Sometimes the just perfect word is hard to find but if the writing is filled with what is in our heart them the poem will fall into place. Thank your for sharing and for dropping by my page. This one reads like a good contender for for the contest to me . Way to go. Sara
Canerdy Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 10:23 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. Janice
Kauffman Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 12:15 PM
So powerfully expressed Janice! Words of emotive depth for the journey of your poet heart all written with a subtle smile. Made me :). Best wishes for the contest with this delightful poet's poem! Blessings!
Canerdy Avatar
May 22, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Sam, this is such a wonderful response to the poem THANKS a million! Janice
Pandit Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 1:41 PM
Power of your pen expresses the depths you feel, Janice. Excellent poem.
Canerdy Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 2:43 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
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