The Power of P

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Poetic Form: Alliteration

Inspired: 2024 August 21

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Peking's 
          past 
               periods; 
                         palatial 
                                   personage 
                                                 preferred 
                                                             Pekingnese 
                                                                            pets 
                                                                                 people 
                                                                                         pleasers 
                                                                                                    poor 
                                                                                        penniless  
                                                                              peasant          
                                                                  presence 
                                                           plenty 
                                                priceless 
                                     precious 
                          presents
                     Polo
           Pipeline
Paradise                                        Pink Pagoda pain pleasure

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/22/2024 11:24:00 AM

Those good old P words. Great showcasing of them

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/22/2024 12:09:00 PM

My friend from So Cal kinda homophobe we took him to the Pink Pagoda down Haight & Ashbury S.F. late 70s ere aids. A massage parlor of Gay-sha masseuse. My wife and I laughed.

Jan Allison

Date: 8/21/2024 1:38:00 AM

perfect poetry! hugs jan xx

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/21/2024 1:44:00 AM

Mahalo Jan, O gawd, I missed two P's, ugh. Aloha William