Caroline Cécile Delacroix Poet Choka

The Power of Love (Part 1)

The First Day
(A day, beyond time and space, can be a thousand years, a thousand years can be a day)


Bursting energy
Blown throughout the universe
Myriads of galaxies, charged
By solar power.
The power of love
That gives and gives and forget
What it has given.
The Force that creates
A world so incredible
That answers to just one law
The logic of love.
And the first dawn rose
Over vast oceans so blue
Life evolving brew.

By CarolineCecile
Copyright © 04.25.10

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Cecil Hickman May 31, 2010 at 12:14 AM beautifully wroded with romance and sensuality,,,I want to Thank You for taking the time to read and comment upon my words,,,Blessings..Cecil

Audrey Haick May 3, 2010 at 8:36 AM Terrific insight into life and love!! Love, Audrey

Andrea Dietrich May 1, 2010 at 9:40 PM VEry nice, Caroline, and very pretty at the end there! Luv, Andrea

Marty Owens April 30, 2010 at 9:05 PM Wonderful poem...I'm headed for part 2...enjoyed...Marty

David Byrne April 30, 2010 at 5:19 PM great construction on a great theme!

Tim Ryerson April 30, 2010 at 1:02 PM 'And the first dawn rose'...Wow! Love BOTH Choka's, Caroline!...Perfect syllable count...I second John Moses' and Carolyns' comment on this also! - Tim

Gert W. Knop April 29, 2010 at 5:15 AM So nicely penned, Caroline! Danke für die freundlichen Kommentare!...Alles Gute!...Gert

John Freeman April 28, 2010 at 8:38 AM Oh yes you've captured the essence of Love, the law of the higher logic. Love it, Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart April 27, 2010 at 12:07 PM Well now I need to know the Part 2 as this has left me quite breathless Caroline.. truly the power of love is stronger than any force on this Planet ... keep me posted as to your sequel ..thankxxx for your kind comments on my poetry today..luv.. Linda-Marie

Carolyn Devonshire April 26, 2010 at 10:03 AM Incredible, Caroline! You vision of the first day is vivid and I love the spiritual quality -- answering only to "The logic of love." Science and spirituality can mix quite nicely; this poem is proof. Love, Carolyn

James Marshall Goff April 25, 2010 at 8:18 PM yes, Caroline, it is so....intensely beautiful! indeed! and thank you for your kind words on my poem about the "Ojibway" Wolf-guide, you are correct! jim