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The Power of Love

I'm worlds apart from you, sweetheart my step is slow; I've lost my glow an empty bed; my heart is shred my yearning strong, a mournful song I LOVE YOU I'm happy now, though misty-eyed distance despite, we're side-by-side no more I walk; I'm prone to glide tho' lone, I sense you by my side My tread is sure, just short of flight my heart once heavy feather-light emotions soar, free-flap my wings I'm scarce of speech; instead I sing

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/22/2013 5:31:00 PM

Ahh!! Enjoyed the rhythm and flow of this one..Thanks for the visit..I am delighted that you came by..Sara

Kelly Deschler

Date: 11/21/2013 7:57:00 PM

This poem is lovely, and written beautifully! I like the rhyme scheme that you used here. Very nice work, Licia!...Thank you for the wonderful comments on my poem. I appreciate it very much!

Jack Ellison

Date: 11/21/2013 7:42:00 AM

Whooooaaa! This is beautiful... did YOU write this... no naughties!!! Seriously, this is a keeper! Love ya Miss Licia xoxoxox

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/21/2013 5:57:00 AM

A marvelous poem of love: Incomparable in its beauty, tenderness and devotion! What heart wouldn't be moved by these words of love? Who wouldn't be delighted to listen to this music divine? A 7 the list I can give but my spirit 7x10 is ready to offer, dear LICIA!

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 11/2/2013 10:21:00 PM

You captured the strength of love you expertly .....lovely write! Hugs

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper

Date: 11/1/2013 8:32:00 PM

Yeah there is power in this love poem! A romantic are we...? LOL! Very nice Licia! MC

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 10/27/2013 3:02:00 PM

Lovely and dreamy. You sure got the power of love down. I'm really enjoying some of your poems today! I think I'll read another. Always, Laura

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/26/2013 2:20:00 PM

The greatest feeling is no secret, few humans enjoy the power of love...Delysia, your poem is nice and melts the mind when one hears them words... ""I LOVE YOU"" sending soup mail...LINDA

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/24/2013 7:12:00 PM

So nice to read your verse this evening. Light & Love

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 10/24/2013 8:22:00 AM

Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/24/2013 1:32:00 AM

This is Delicious my Friend. The Rhyme is superb. Love message so enchanting. Thanks for making my day. Friend, JM

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/24/2013 1:30:00 AM

This is Delicious my Friend. The Rhyme is superb. Love message so enchanting. Thanks for making my day. Friend, JM

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/23/2013 10:20:00 PM

There is no absence of love, it is all the time present, delysia

Richard D Seal

Date: 10/23/2013 6:30:00 PM

I think you should slightly change the title to 'The POWer of Love', judging by the effect it's had on you Sis, walking on air is you, ah yes, I remember that feeling. Very tenderly written. Take care, Richard