The Poor In Spirit

God sees the poor in spirit* groaning in pain Languishing in fleshly miseries where they’re slain Being ruled by discouragement that’s vain While hoping for His miracle to gain. God invites them to immerse himself in His loving domain! God hears them crying for divine aid and support Excruciating from downfall’s discomfort Wailing due to deceit and false report While begging for His help, their ultimate resort. God leads them to kneel with faith humbly before His gracious fort! God knows them needing for urgent care Beseeching for His assured welfare Ailing with discontentment’s scare While longing for His promises they treat as rare. God brings them to His throne where at His blessings they can stare! God understands them sighing anxiously Expressing their complaints sorrowfully Murmuring about unfairness grudgingly While questioning their state bitterly. God counsels them to seek His will meaningfully! God recognizes them in their struggles against frustration Succumbing to sinfulness’ oppression Leaning toward welcoming desperation While craving for His pardon’s restoration. God grants them forgiveness upon confessing their iniquities of destruction! God remembers them cringing in difficulty Mourning over their self-inflicted calamity Grieving because of worldliness-caused infirmity While yearning for His joy and tranquility. God cares for them with His mercy, guiding them by His light’s authority! God pities them in their woes as they feel worthless Wallowing in the futility of slothfulness Afflicted with the guilt of fruitlessness Pleading for His compassion and faithfulness. God instructs them to serve Him thru His power to enjoy His bountifulness!
*Matthew 5:3 Blessed are the poor in spirit: for theirs is the kingdom of heaven. December 15, 2018 7th place, "Tinker, Taylor" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Julia Ward; judged on 12/29/2018.

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Date: 1/1/2019 2:55:00 PM
Very well crafted, Beata. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 12/16/2018 7:59:00 AM
Beautiful and uplifting content, Beata; love the monorhyming, too. Regards & blessings // paul
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Date: 12/15/2018 11:27:00 AM
Beata, you expounded on the First Beatitude well, true to your name :) ~Mark
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