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The Pool so Cool

I was walking on the street Some water splashed on my feet. It was a pool, Wow! It looked so cool. I changed into my swimming suit, And dove into the pool. Playing in the water, Suddenly I felt the water getting hotter. Surprised I looked down to find a shark, I splashed, kicked, pushed, and found it dark. Scared I gave out a scream, To find my sister pulling my leg out of the dream.

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Date: 8/18/2024 6:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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