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The Pool of Love

Some people find the pool of love And decided to dive right in Before testing the temperature To see if it's warm enough to swim Some people lather themselves up Just to lay out in the sun As they watch all the others frolic Wishing they could join in on the fun Some pools are rather murky So you must keep and eye on the sharks Shallow or deep they'll take you off at the knees For a closer advantage to tear out your heart If you step out of the pool After a swim in the deep end Could you play the part of a wading fool And jump right back in again With no life guard on duty To blow the whistle when you've had enough You best be careful when you swim In the pool of love

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/22/2017 12:34:00 PM
well crafted into an eye-romancing beauty... Your lines and words are just lovely... Its nice visiting one of your pages again..
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Date: 7/18/2017 8:28:00 AM
Clever and creative write about love Mike; beware when you hear the theme from Jaws!~Che :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 7:46:00 AM
True Mike and people do live and learn. It is not easy. I hope those hurt will continue to hope :)
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Date: 7/18/2017 7:25:00 AM
Nice. But having swum with sharks, one gets to know how to avoid them.
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