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The Pool

(Prov. 3: 5, 6 / Jer. 10: 23 / 1 Cor. 10: 12, 13)



While Driving Down A Winding Road
On A Day So Humid–Hot
Out of The Way and To The Side
I Glimpsed A Half-Hid Spot …

I Almost Did Not See It
It Was Guarded Well By Trees
But There Was No Fence or Signs
Of Being Private Property …

It Was Still Early Afternoon
On A Lazy, Long Weekend
So Instead of Going To The Mall
I Drove Closer & Got Out … To Get In

There, On That Plot of Ground
Gleamed The Smoothest, Inviting Pool
So Still & Surrounded By Rocks
It Looked So Tranquil & Cool

So I Took A Sturdy, Leafy Limb
Of A Fallen Branch On The Grass
To Climb Down That Stone-Mound-Citadel
… but I Fell – It All Happened So Fast!

As The Pool Rippled Around My Body
Concentric To My Shoulders, It Crept
At First I Could Wade Neck-Deep
But The Pool Changed To Bottomless-Depths

And Down I Went Further & Further
Tho’ I Strove Up With All My Might!
‘Til Nearly Drowning & Passing Out
As Lungs & Heart Were Squeezed So Tight

But Something Touched Me With Fluid Grace
& Began Lifting Me From This Pluvial-Pail
Drew Me Up In Steady-Splashes
Like A Bucket Being Raised From A Well

But The Day Had Changed
& So Had The Place
And The Pool Now Showed
A Rain-Plop-Plop, Lapping Face

And I Don’t Know How Long I’d Been Gone
Now I’m Just Trying To Make It Back Home
In A Wet ‘n Wild World – That’s Not My Own …
‘Cause A Pool Made A Fool of Me Turning Wrong

So, If Driving Down A Winding Road
On A Day So Humid–Hot
Beware of Out of The Way & To The Side
& Don’t Look At …  That Half–Hid Spot

                Written & ©:  7/2/2013

                 By:  The MoonBee

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/18/2013 8:56:00 AM
we all do crazy things lol, a fun read, have a blessed day, LUV, S.K.A.T.
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Date: 9/14/2013 7:14:00 PM
Thank you SKAT-AUX ... glad to bring a smile (and this was my tongue-in-cheek tribute to The Twilight Zone - a sort of dimension-travel -lol ... and again, thank you so much for finding and commenting ... Poet Pal, MoonBee

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