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The Pondering Clown

Every day I see a pondering clown He rests his arms on a stone platform No one knows what he is thinking His eyes stare down -there is no smile both hands to his face, looking so sad The eyes look like he will cry tears He carries the worries of the world Wonders what will happen next This pondering clown is part of my collection Sitting on my shelf, I see him every day

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/8/2017 3:17:00 PM
Hi Dar, I thought he was real and your ending really surprised me. A very good poem.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 9/8/2017 8:28:00 PM
He is real to me. He is a statue clown with a sad face. In tattered clothes looking so sad. My husband bought this clown for me. Have a nice evening my friend.
Date: 1/17/2017 11:15:00 AM
Very intriguing poem, Darlene. The thoughts and emotions projected onto an inanimate object opens the mind to pure imagination. Delightful poem w/meaningful ponderings. Loved it. Peace and love to you.
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Date: 1/6/2017 10:05:00 AM
I like this writing. It is cool and adorable. You have done a very nice job making the reading to ponder what will happen next. Nice work, have a blessed day. - Augustus
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Augustus Black
Date: 1/6/2017 7:46:00 PM
Ha! Ha! Ha! Very cool. Stay well and happy.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/6/2017 12:43:00 PM
Hello Augustus,thank you. I enjoyed writing this poem.I have this staute clown on my shelf. He is my favourite ornament.It was this sad clown ornament I wrote about. Ilike this clown.
Date: 1/4/2017 7:11:00 AM
Very interesting and compelling image here, Darlene. Thank you for sharing this. -- Wesley C.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/8/2017 10:36:00 AM
I enjoy reading your poems to.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/4/2017 8:40:00 AM
Hello Space Cadet,I had fun writing this poem.
Date: 1/3/2017 1:57:00 PM
This is a cool poem, Darlene. Displaying great imagination:)
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 1/3/2017 5:55:00 PM
Thank you Daniel, I made this poem longer than what it was before. I have another one on the way soon. This was a fun write for me to do.

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