The Pondering Clown

Every day I see a pondering clown
He rests his arms on a stone platform
No one knows what he is thinking
His eyes stare down -there is no smile
both hands to his face, looking so sad

The eyes look like he will cry tears
He carries the worries of the world 
Wonders what will happen next
This pondering clown is part of my collection
Sitting on my shelf, I see him every day
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Berggren Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 3:17 PM
Hi Dar, I thought he was real and your ending really surprised me. A very good poem.
De Beaulieu Avatar
September 8, 2017 at 8:28 PM
He is real to me. He is a statue clown with a sad face. In tattered clothes looking so sad. My husband bought this clown for me. Have a nice evening my friend.
Robinson Jr. Avatar
January 17, 2017 at 11:15 AM
Very intriguing poem, Darlene. The thoughts and emotions projected onto an inanimate object opens the mind to pure imagination. Delightful poem w/meaningful ponderings. Loved it. Peace and love to you.
Black Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 10:05 AM
I like this writing. It is cool and adorable. You have done a very nice job making the reading to ponder what will happen next. Nice work, have a blessed day. - Augustus
Black Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 7:46 PM
Ha! Ha! Ha! Very cool. Stay well and happy.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 6, 2017 at 12:43 PM
Hello Augustus,thank you. I enjoyed writing this poem.I have this staute clown on my shelf. He is my favourite ornament.It was this sad clown ornament I wrote about. Ilike this clown.
Cadet Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 7:11 AM
Very interesting and compelling image here, Darlene. Thank you for sharing this. -- Wesley C.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 8, 2017 at 10:36 AM
I enjoy reading your poems to.
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 4, 2017 at 8:40 AM
Hello Space Cadet,I had fun writing this poem.
Turner Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 1:57 PM
This is a cool poem, Darlene. Displaying great imagination:)
De Beaulieu Avatar
January 3, 2017 at 5:55 PM
Thank you Daniel, I made this poem longer than what it was before. I have another one on the way soon. This was a fun write for me to do.
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