The Pond

bright blue forget-me-nots speckle lime green duckweed. golden willow leaves crisp against the black water. the whisper of winter's breath rises just beyond the cat-tails.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Freeman Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 5:55 PM
Beautiful, Audrey! Congrats on your worthy poetry. Agape, Moses
Decker Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:45 AM
Thank You very much Moses! Audrey
Taylor Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 12:08 PM
Congrats, Audrey. Great write. Nice going. Happy Holidays to you and yours. luv Ralph
Decker Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:44 AM
Thank you Ralph, belated Happy Holidays to you also! :) Audrey
Arno Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 6:49 AM
Congratulations on your entry in the Sixes And Sevens contest :)
Decker Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:43 AM
Thanks a lot Jon! Audrey
Brown Avatar
December 19, 2011 at 6:27 AM
Congratulations on your super win in Brian's "Sixes And Sevens" contest Audrey. Love, Carol
Decker Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:42 AM
thank You Carol, love Audrey
Williams Avatar
December 13, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Audrey my pond is just like this, thanks for your comments..David
Decker Avatar
January 16, 2012 at 8:41 AM
Thanks David, this is about the old pond at my father's house. We had a lot of fun in and on it year round. Audrey
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